Fool that I am. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2004

Just found that one Kay.
It is excellent ! I love it. I can rely to it so well. It hurts like hell if we really want to be with somebody - even if it is just as friends - and have to find out that somebody else has taken our place.
Your write is superb.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

(((((Kay)))))

I know your feelings exactly! Well put, sweet lady.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

We all have been like this at one time or another. Take care Kay!

((((( Hugs )))))
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

A SADNESS I THINK WE HAVE ALL EXPERIENCED ONCE IN OUR LIVES,,HIS LOSS I'M SURE,WELL SAID,BUT YOU ARE NOT THE FOOL,HE WAS FOR NOT TAKING THE TIME TO SEE THE WONDERFUL LADY IN FRONT OF HIM,,TAKE CARE MY FRIEND.
CHARLIE

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Kay, next time jump in with both feet... Have Faith.

God bless,
Tim

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

This was so moving, I loved this, wish you had taken the chance, you never know!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

It is never too late!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Very sad, Kay...very, very sad. {{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

a charming poem Kay, it reminds me of the cool song "why do fools fall in love". I think love makes everyone do foolish things. welcome to the club Kay, I sitting in the back row trying to hide. peace

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

BONZER write, m'lady! wonderful job! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Kay,

You really touch us with this one.

Outstanding!

Shy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

O" Kay I think I know what you feel like....I am with you in that sinking bloody love boat....at least I have my Balloon friends around to comfort me on those sad days!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Great write Kay, i'm sure we all some time or other share the same thoughts,take care of yourself...Mark xx

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

It is not a uswise to take a chance or two when you have a Mr Right like that..Excellent write :)

Your Friend from India,
Debashish

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

it's never too late... go for it... maybe he harbors the same feelings he also was afraid to express... you'll never know until you try...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

I love this one and next time for sure.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

ah Kay my buddy,I know this feeling;-)but there is always a reason and you have learned from this. Methinks it will happen again soon,and you'll know what to do;-)Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

He is just a fragment of the soul mate you are yet to meet. Great write!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Is it really too late, or just delayed once again. Excellent write.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Only Fool's Never Make Mistakes!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Aching write, Kay... Keep looking! :)

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Kay,
What you felt for this person was not really love. It was infatuation. Love is not so easy. It takes time and hard work to make a loving relationship strong.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

A wonderful write Kay!! Well done.

Jack