Marriage.. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

A wonderful poem, but really sad. I pray this is fiction. Real love does not bind, it gives us freedom to be. I fear in this world that there are many who have not seen real love.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Some very powerful writing here, Kay! Missed reading your work...

"Heart plume he tears,

raw flesh he bares by pruning captive wing

trapped I find my prisoned mind bound by bind

....of ring."

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

This to me is sad. Perhaps that is the intent and perhaps it is fictional. Either way, it is soul wrenching.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Oh how moving this was Kay, beautifully written and presented,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Hi Kay,
I am glad that this is
fiction...

Written so well...

Have a happy day...

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Kisses too.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

ouch, officer free that smiley face. glad this is fiction

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

This cuts deep! Great write!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Wow this is an incredible write, Kay. Compelling emotion.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Very well done Kay

I like your little "Chained-smile" at the bottom of your poem!!

Lovce Tinka

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Sad write; but nicely-written. *LOL at Ron's comments*

Take care Kay!

((((( HugZ )))))

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Sad write....done in a wonderful way....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Kay, this is so very sad! I felt this deep in my heart, very well written...~Z~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

the enduring ring of a true marriage is magic itself...

well done! sad write on how things can turn out...

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Onya mate, it gets it out!
Marriage aye, hmmmmm, yes well challenging even if one does manage to stay married. I'm maritally challenged, because he is a man LOL.

Love the Bird comparison.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Excellent write of sad event...the graphic is great;-)...So hurtful to remember...love and hugs to you ((((Kay)))))

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Some marriages should have never been....
I guess that's why we have the divorce...
Love the write and graphic.......
SMoooooooooooo000000000000000CH!