Smitten. ( Short poem/old work) (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

Hey, I'm smitten too! With my kitten(s). (Old to you, new to me.)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

{{{{Kay}}}}
Oooooh my dear friend this is truly a wonderful and excellant "old" piece of work! Ahhh alas I remember smitten to bad the first for some of us never seems to last!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on December 5, 2003

Beautifully creative work, Kay
Amor

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 5, 2003

Creatively expressed and it makes me think about something I can relate to. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on December 5, 2003

Kay, I remember smitten... it was my cat... joking... but I do remember smitten, you express that "brush" and I hear myself gasping at the memory... great write....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2003

Oh this just lightly brushes the soul
and sweepingly grabs it so, then soft words adorn you!

Loved this one!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 5, 2003

Excellent write Kay!!

I think I read this one before!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on December 4, 2003

OH KAY

This is so so Sweet and well done.

peg

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on December 4, 2003

I think it is divine Kay. You know I reckon, that daily around this den, fly's some kind of a little cupid, who smites everyone with a thought, and causes us to brandish each other with it's genius LOLOL.
Its like a yawn, catching. I caught it earlier today myself LOL.
Beaut mate
Love
Ch'erie

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 4, 2003

i like the image of feeling the face " with nothing but a trace
of forward thought?" well done!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 4, 2003

This was excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 4, 2003

Kay, this is a short comment from an old guy, LOL
Very Nice!

Peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 4, 2003

I love this fantastic poem Kay! It is enchanting and so creative with unique word usage!Kudo's