Cold--I rise--
through layers of darkness,
the weight of the sea,
above me--within me.
Small life darts by.
leaving a scent of terror
Do not fear--
you are too small
to ease the burden
of my hunger.
And I am so tired of sushi.
Blue arrives in ever brighter patches.
Light fans across my eyes.
I drift toward the surface--air!
I breath the salt winds,
letting them guide me to shore.
Men arrive with weapons
to defend the small
shattered boxes
I trample in passing.
Iron wings spit thunder and fire.
Girder towers crowned with wire
Kiss my skin with lightning.
I skreech defiance,
my breath is ice,
my hunger grows...
why so much bother
over take-out?
You'd think Tokyo
was closed.
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Reviews of "Eating Out"
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2002
I felt this down to my toes
a very moving write
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2002
Yes Lee this is outstanding and I noticed the same line as the other reviewers. Very
well done. Bill
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well done. Bill
kiss my skin with lightening fairly jumped out at me
i love it when things jump out at me
you get a 10
josie
Lee, excellent piece!
Peg