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Love Notes Tattered
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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I waited for her in my dingy room
Where books were scattered
And love notes tattered on the floor

The darkness came with a storm
Thunder rumbled, lightening chose
It's targets.   .   .

I was not afraid just tired of waiting
She was always late and she hasn't changed
In all the years I've known her

She kissed me long, I kissed her hard
We toasted our love with red wine
Always, she surprises me...

We undressed each other slowly,
As though we were seeing each other
For the very first time-

Our kissing becomes breathtaking
Lying ourselves on the bed
We kissed and made love till dawn   

 


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 Reviews of "Love Notes Tattered"
Reviewed on June 7, 2012
Savoring These Poetic Moments!!
The slow Undressing Rehersals! NICE!!!
Tenderness is so beautiful...as is too sometimes
the immediate urgency to create a clothes trail :)

Lip Balms & Flavored Lipsticks
Pucker Passions & Prose
Vickie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 7, 2012
She's a dream you live for.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 7, 2012
Get the sense that this is a sort of old flame/booty call where one partner cares more than the other, either way intense.
fee

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 7, 2012
Passionate writing!!!


Anna

Reviewed on June 7, 2012
What a message you project. Almost an obvious message, not about the binding together in making love, but the relationship itself.

Well done and very interesting as well.

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on June 6, 2012
Quite lovely, Deborah! Slow and sweet, with messages within within the poem.

dingy room
with a storm
tired of waiting
kissed her hard
each other slowly
breathtaking

or

scattered
chose
hasn't changed
red wine
each other
on the bed

and

floor
targets
her
me
time-
dawn

:) I could go on, but, sometimes, the reader sees it all, then loses it, then finds it, and on and on.. Enjoyed the content and contexted formulation.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on June 6, 2012
It seems the storm went on unnoticed!!

Love ya!

Jane


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