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An Everlasting Love
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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The mist floated across
The ocean shore
Finding refuge
Within our loveless hearts

Hearts that gave up
On the treasures
Of love and only
Pursued lust-

We had no intimacy
Taking what we needed
From each other
Time and again

We were afraid of the closeness
Pulling us together
Having to depend on each other
A bonded relationship

That Sunday we found love
Love that enveloped our souls
Breathed life into our hearts
Generating an everlasting  love.  .  .


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Reviewed on June 21, 2012
:) and you asked me a question prior to this. You nearly answered it in your last 4 lines Deborah.

Wonderfully written and expressed as is all your prose and poems

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 20, 2012
Sometimes resistance is futile...and when we're open everlasting love finds a place to live in our hearts. Beautifully penned, Deborah...

Anna

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 20, 2012
I wonder what it was in Sunday and made all the difference?

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 20, 2012
Wonderful write. I do believe in love at first sight, or at least instant attraction, but I also believe love is something that is build nurtured over time until it becomes everlasting.
fee

Reviewed on June 19, 2012
I like that you say "found love"
so many people say "fall in love" or
"fell in love" ...and you know how that goes
Intimacy is a beautiful bond tenderly embracing into love
a beautiful feeling in this poem
& too the voice of reasons in the wild feral's of lust

Untamed & Unbriddled
Vickie

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on June 19, 2012
A friendship foundation evolving into
lovers *Debrorah* should stand for the
test of time and for reading....

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 19, 2012
I love how the discovery of love seemingly creeps up to and enfolds you in this poem, Deborah - rather like that invasiver and pervasive mist. Fear evaporates as true feelings are nurtured in the security of knowingness. Lust is transformed and transcends into the real, life-giving deal - nice! :)) xx

Reviewed on June 19, 2012
Now this sounds like a solid type of love, girl!

Love ya!

Jane


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