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I Think Not... ..
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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Can you see me
From a distance

Do you not hear
My cries-
From my darkened
Surroundings
And misconstrue
Life

Would you like
To subscribe
To this deep well
So dark,

Be myself 
For a day

I think Not... .. 

 

 


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 Reviews of "I Think Not... .."
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 22, 2012
Tears dampen your words.

Rose

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on September 22, 2012
a poetic descent into sadness!
I hope you feel better soon Deborah, Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 22, 2012
So very sad.

Reviewed on September 21, 2012
Dear Lord it must be going around. You know I have heard that fall is a harbenger of depression for many, being as the sunlight shrinks, and it is for me. Deborah...may I offer you a hand of friendship and shared support? Your write was much briefer than my recent offering but spoke so elequently, so grippingly, of exactly where I go as well. You touched my heart deeply. If this comes but from your imagination, I am happy for your well being and astounded to my core. Be well, Kathy

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on September 21, 2012
Fallen deep, but only
up from there *Deborah*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed on September 20, 2012
The well you write about is a tough one to climb out of sometimes. You will!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on September 20, 2012
Naught a good place to be, never spiral within
yourself to this place for it only goes further
down into the abyss

Expressively felt write that tells much

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 20, 2012
avery deep sorrowful write Deborah
budd

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2012
"Would you like/To subscribe/To this deep well" those lines carry much heaviness and angst. This poem is effectively conveying much emotion, and the last line "I think Not... ..." contains in it a slow head shake to be sure. Greatly expressive. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 20, 2012
I think we all go there at times and we all must struggle to find the light again...intense write.
fee


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