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Taking it Slowly
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
Wednesday, May 13, 2015    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Young love...


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Bodies climbing uphill
Dunes-
Breathing as though
It was their last breath

Taking it slowly
Kisses would suffice
Hands digging
Into grains of sand

One day they would
Explore-
More than kisses
Waiting for souls to caress
 

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 Reviews of "Taking it Slowly"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 14, 2015
Love Jerry's comment. May that timing be perfect. I like the breathless, rapt expression here, Deborah. xx

Reviewed on May 14, 2015
One of your best!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 13, 2015
Enjoy being young while you can as getting old SUCKS...-e-

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on May 13, 2015
...a time to show the real feelings and to...laugh
out loud...not to afraid to laugh-be-silly-out going
free from the dictates of the around us...in love
with beauty and this world...You made my day!
Deborah...Thanks.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 13, 2015
A case where going slowly wins the race, that's for sure!

Breathless.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 13, 2015
I totally "get" this, Deborah. I can so relate. I find it lovingly engaging and meaningful. You meant to write "breath" in the last verse of your first stanza. I hate typos. I make them all the time and I appreciate it when others point them out since I don't notice them because they are my own. Lol! Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 13, 2015
Marvelous love poem

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 13, 2015
Ahhh . . . And when souls caress the seal of love is absolute . . .


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