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You Took My Breath Away
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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I took this photo as well, and named it
'Inspiring Moments'
When I read your comments, on my Thank You and So Long write, the inspiration and caring that I felt was overwhelmingly touching. Each of you honestly did humble me, and I cried, but they were tears of joy not sorrow.
Thank You so very much!


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You Took My Breath Away


 


You took my breath away;
you humbled me; and I cried-
Your words of sincerity spoke
to my soul-
My heart ached; in assiduous beats
of goodbye


'Tis the season of goodness; And
as cold as it seemed-
There came a light; Shining through
the darkest of times-
While the shadows fell silent; An Angel
found its way-
to warm and comfort me; so  I could
share my rhyme


Mere words etched; Scratched into
the crevices of life-
They've become the truth to who I
really am-
Gift me a piece of lead- and I'll
mark my world-
Show me an opened door; And I'll
not let it slam


I've been rebirthed to a voice
in verse-
An offering in which on my own
I couldn't touch-
You took my breath away; You
humbled me; And I cried-
For all the tears; I once again say,
'Thank You, Thank You All,
so very, very much'


© Lisa Hilbers
12/10/2005


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 Reviews of "You Took My Breath Away"
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
No words can express what one feels by reading this...
Lol, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
I hope then you have maybe..pretty please....hopefully taken time to rethink your decision to leave.We all love you and would miss you immensely.

Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
How very beautifully said. Good luck to you. R

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
Kisa you touch us all with your beautiful mind and bless us with your splendid words! I look forward to many more of them! Thank you!

Love, and Merry Christmas
Eileen

Reviewed on December 10, 2005
You're most welcome, dear heart! The Den would be so much darker without you here; you are NEEDED here~ God bless you this Merry Christmas and New Year season, and know that you are always in my heart and prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on December 10, 2005
(((Lisa)))

Beautiful. :) See, I told you you'd find a Christmas miracle. :) And it comes alive in your grateful words. It is I who is blessed to read your words. Thank you, may we continue to behold excellence in your poetry.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
Well, you choked me up yet again, Lisa. As I have already said, I will truly miss you. Your words have been an inspiration to me and your strong writes about our soldiers have been straight from the heart and like a clear vision into their souls. You write about freedom, something that seems to slip away just a little bit more every day due to apathy and an underlying desire to crush it. Your words ring like a bell for liberty and right and your humble spirit never fails to recognize that without devine intervention, we would never make it through the difficult times. I wish you would stay, because when you go you leave a huge empty space here that cannot be filled. May your continuing journey reward you with health, love and happiness.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
Right from your wonderful and loving heart.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
Oh now I am crying.....dang....THANK YOU SIS for sharing part of yourself through the written words of you heart!!

Love Tinka {snif-snif}

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on December 10, 2005
Thank YOU, Lisa! It is a pleasure to know you and read your words. (:D Peace. Joyce


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