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Pass the Mustard, Please
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Pass the Mustard, Please


 


 


Edging; Nudging; Somewhere close to you-
Can you feel the heat from my intentions?
Good? Bad? Who knows?
The cat seemed happy enough-
Figure eights; In. Out. It’s all about the comfort-
Zoning; Honing, in on me. You. Them. Us.
Stretching; Making the day appear natural; Don’t
upset the children!
Hug them for the very last time, just don’t
tell them so-
Hear the rumble? See the dust- Flying through the
air with might and must- Monster dreams coming
true at last!
Grab those sunglasses; Don’t miss the final moment!
Wear your pretty hat to this memorable occasion-
Independence Day; Hear the blasts? Scud or Dud?
Oh look Mommy at all the lights in the darkened skies!
Ever ask yourself, Why?  Are they really lies? Who knows!
Who cares? Will it matter in the end? Ask anyway;
Will our skies return to fair- Fair to partly cloudy? Or
was it just a notice? Eviction or Friction?
Hand me the hotdog buns; Mustard please;
Put the cat out; Close the door; Pull the drapes;
It won’t matter anyway-
Say? Say man? Have you any clay? Maybe we can
create our own perfect day- World- Way-


 


© Lisa Hilbers


 


 


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 Reviews of "Pass the Mustard, Please"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Love it!

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
Loved the style, flow of this -- really captured the feeling of the day.
Leysa

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
Lisa as always you capture the very soul of the day as it happens and bring it into our hearts and let us savour the taste of your thoughts. This poem is almost Dylan-istic in it's lyrical ability and that is a compliment because Dylan was my hero. Great write Lisa.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
Always a pleasure to read your excellent work Lisa!Love this one!

Reviewed on July 5, 2006
Lisa,

W O W. Amid the chaos, blessings come in little moments--enjoy each one as it comes. As I loved reading this slice of life poem, very well written, by the way...thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
Yes amid the torment of worrying day to day over who's gonna go to war with whom, plague pestilence and poverty, a little bit of enjoyment breaks the monotony. Well said Lisa.
Good to read you again, it's been a while.
Ch'eriexx

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
The world is certainly feeling like something we might want to hide from these days but the truth is, if we don't keep our finger on the pulse, we will lose all that we have. Apathy abounds...Let's all just pretend it is another perfect day in paradise. Excellent work, Lisa. This poem kind of played out like an old B movie...your images casting themselves in black and white. I could almost see the blackout shades on the windows.
Take care,
Sherry


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