Lost Soul (Debs Challenge) (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

Sherry my thoughts on this poem echo the others reviews.....this is a shade of fantastic.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

I love this Sherry! Very well done my friend!

Jack

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

Right on, Sherry. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

This poem is massive in scope, but not as wonderful and loving as your big, beautiful heart. You show a 'knowing' few of us arrive at. I read your words as if you were speaking them to me. Do you sacrifice living to wait and hope and wait and hope and wait and hope. Is he worth waiting for? Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on May 10, 2004

This says that we must willingly, although often uncomfortably, become beacons in the fog to guide a lost captain's life-ship safely to shore.
The hard part is making certain our beam never goes out. Hence, we encourage one another. And if we disagree on something, it's all a part of our fabric that we create for ourselves. But we can still encourage each other.

blessin's, very nice verses,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 9, 2004

One of your best I think Sherry. This is a beautifully written, emotive response to the challenge. I've not been reading and writing for a little while so I must catch up.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 4, 2004

Brilliant write Sherry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

Sherry,

This is just another exceptional example of a wonderfully written poem meant to honor Mr. Haar's challenge. Very creative and intense. I am reading and enjoying your poetry.

Best of luck,
Thomas

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

brilliant, moving, very intense images!

Searching for strength to pull you from your darkened corners < < < < you have a poet's heart to match your quill ...

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

I love the emotive effects and the expressions in this BREATHTAKING response....BRILLIANT work, Sherry...Thanks for extending your support for the challenge...

I am reading your poetry!

Debashish

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

This was really good!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

This was exquisite Sherry, just beautifully written, an excellent response to Deb's challenge,

Reindeer

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

oh lord!!!!! wish i wrote it sherry.........bravo!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

Absolutely beautiful work here Sherry...
truly wonderful lines here...floria