By The Sea (Haiku) (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 14, 2008

I love the metaphorical tones and the meaning within your verses here, Sherry. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Just an overwhelming talented flair for writing you possess!
Grrrr! I am envious! *smile*

Best Wishes,
Chuckie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

This is absolutely beautiful!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

I don't have to choose....Right? These are excellent. The photo makes them breath. Brings life to the page and gives sound to the words.
I love it when the pages echo. Like this one.
Thank You Sherry! Thank You.

Lisa

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

1st stanza was a personally felt one.

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Sherry-this said so much. The recleansing is perfection in this piece.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Did you write this one for moi???

Love it excellent write Sherry!!

A keeper!1

Love Tinka

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Lovely work, Sherry.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

metaphor and imagery are awesome and beautifully rendered ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

really nice

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

beautiful and picturesque wording........you put me there, i could feel the mist.......ty pax A

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Beautiful picture and wonderful Haiku poems! Good job on these!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Hopeful hearts embrace
Ocean cleanses pain and shame
Love blooms once again

Awesome! Maybe - love swells again (to continue ocean metaphor)?

SueB

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

"By The Sea (Haiku)" delivers its message through a poetic grand!

This poem, "By The Sea (Haiku)" inspires and nourishes the mind.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Dear Sherry

They are all so great, beautifully expressed, powerful.
My favourite one has to be the last:

Hopeful hearts embrace
Ocean cleanses pain and shame
Love blooms once again < <---- wonderful sentiments

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Outstanding! To me they are equally beautiful
and full of meaning.Tied together by relationships
with ocean metaphor. You can't beat the wisdom of
the eternal sea;-)!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

All these Haikus are significant Sherry...my favourite is " Meeting by the sea ..Waves caress aching spirits... Soothing wounded hearts "
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Wonderful Sea Chain, Sherry. Think I like the last one the best, and that is an awesome photo, too!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

(((sherry)))

awesome, beautifully penned haiku; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Awesome work! I can't pick a favorite...