Images
I recall when thoughts of you
Were hot, like the strongest rays of the sun
Blistering your image
Upon my soul
Once, you seemed so sharp
That within my constrained vision
The very keenness of your knife-edge wit
Left it’s mark upon every molecule of my being
You used to be like a sledgehammer
The, bigger than life, images of you
Being pounded into my heart
And even into my most private dreams
In fact, you were like Merlin
Working your magic
Upon my foolish and tender heart
Showering my thoughts with your magical dust
You worked me with great skill
Like a carnival barker, paying for his habit
By selling overpriced tickets
For a ride on the carousel of life
But now I see through all your magic
And I have grown wise
To your trickery and your appeal
I have shaken your dust from my spirit
I am left with nothing of you
Your imprint upon me was like a cheap wine
Designed to temporarily affect my clarity
But falling short of any enlightening effects
You live within your false pretenses
And you believe yourself to be
The very clothes that you wear
And to possess all the charms that you impose
Look again, into the mirror of reality
If you pause for a moment, the smoky haze will clear
Perhaps then you, like I, will see the buffoon
Who walks life’s path in your shoes
Sherry Gail Heim
October 3, 2004
Copyright © Sherry Gail Heim 2004
Reindeer
Hope that's not me
excellent write
William ...peace & love
Excellent poetry Sherry..
Thanks for commenting on me daughters post
She is thrilled with all the comments...
A very precise and cutting piece..I don't know the sound of your voice but I now know how direct it can be!
I liked the control in this one. The straight forward affects. Excellently written!
Lisa
Thanks for the write.
Sledgehammer appeal Sherry...
Peter
Blimey how some are self blind..When heaps would die for such..
Well done!
Chanti
astute, powerful, excellent write! brought him to his knees (or, as i also say, caught him by the short hairs), eh? good on you! LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Balloons in the desert sky. I've seen them in Phoenix. Makes me wish tat I was rising with them!
Ron
The very clothes that you wear
And to possess all the charms that you impose
Look again,
A strong write here, Sherry. Loved lines above. Dawn
very stong and clear.......
power of the independant spirit........
keep it up......
pax A
impressive writing......such words!!
But sadly for me I am still......grrrrrr...you know what!!
Love Tinka
Sadly, this is something most of us have had to do some time in our lives. A most powerful piece, Sherry.
You have such depth of perception to capture the nitty-gritty
of the topic and you express it with lucidity, so that
the message is never blurred!Outstanding poem, Kudo's!