Morning Chat With Myself (Bobbi's Challenge) (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2006

Nice nice poem Sherry! Fantastic poem. True and fun too. Always optimistic too. Tooth paste for burns(c :)!! You are such a pro and i'm so envious of you. Love it and you!
Tracey and Gang 43xoox(c :)

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 6, 2006

Seems like the challenge was well met. Enjoyed the read tremendously.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on March 5, 2006

This is a marvelous poem, Sherry. You really came through and what a pleasure to read! Hope you are better now?

Safi

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on March 4, 2006

This is great, Sherry! If there is any justice, writing it sent
your headache packing. . .by now? Hope so!! Thanks for a most enjoyable and creative write. Keep 'em coming !!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 3, 2006

A superb response to the challenge, Sherry. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 27, 2006

An excellent write
meeting all the words

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 27, 2006

Great. You have done this with great creativity. Thanks Sherry

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 25, 2006

great way to meet the challenge enjd

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 25, 2006

I'm not sure what the challenge was, but your work is first rate.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2006

You do well, with or without a headache.
Good one.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2006

A very clever write that rises to the challenge.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on February 20, 2006

That's the day we all live for...Friday...giggle. I love this sis, it is so true, and I have had days like this before I started having medical problems. I've never had a migraine, but I have had headaches from a work related stress. I think Ronald said it best tho...giggle. Thnx for sharing this wonderfully cute poem with us. I love every line, because I can relate...giggle. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Also, thnx for the review of Is This Love. And, yes, I hope before I pass away, I will actually know true love.

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

A very cute poem about a morning chat with yourself.
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Very Good, Sherry. You certainly met the challenge. Enjoyed the read.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Another day in the life. Oh, the rituals we go through to survive the daily monotony. Good write.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Well, if this is either migraine-driven, or "An ordinary day in the life of"-driven, it is still wonderfully poetic and superbly well-crafted within the constraints of the challenge. Flows and reads effortlessly and is compelling... a paradox to the mood that is intended to be conjured, perhaps. Brilliant, Sherry! "What is the purpose of colorless sheer curtains?" I see the darkness of night Fading and yielding to A rose colored sky... Aaahh!! The mind of a poet at work amidst life's daily grind. Love it. Thank you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

I agree with Jerry below entirely Sherry
You really did do a superb job on Bobbi's Challenge, considering you had the handicap of a bad migraine, it must have been that coffee that did the trick !!
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

At least Friday is payday. Haha! That just about sums it up. I think you did a masterful, better than anyone maybe, with this challenge. Kinda fun, huh?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

:) Well done Sherry.....I am to lazy to try A G A I N!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Well-done, Sherry, well-done! Ya done good!

Peace.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

A brilliant capture of a daily routine, brought so vividly to life. Superb response to the challenge Sherry.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Great response to a challenge and capturing the day to day life of a real women.

Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Quite a fascinating 'slice of life' poem, Sherry, and a great challenge piece.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Sherry,

For having a migraine, you did a bang up job with this! BRAVA; extremely well done! (Hope you feel better soon; take care! Migraines are NOT fun!)

(((HGUS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Great capture of the moment!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

you mean you write all you excellent poems through a migraine? ;)

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Assignment performed to perfection. This could serve to show students everywhere that discipline and perseverance always accomplish... as it has taught me!

I enjoyed the art and contents of "Morning Chat With Myself (Bobbi's Challenge)".

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

All of us have that mantra...Friday! Payday! ;) Great job! ;) Silver

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

I marvel at all the wonderful poems that have been written in answer to Bobbi's challenge. Each one is a gem in itself and this is no different. Migraine
not withstanding this is just superb.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Sherry,

It was like I was sitting right there as you expressed your thoughts. An excellent write, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Sherry - I love to hear you talk to yourself. You actually make good sense... but don't get mad at the first talker of the first part. That'll spoil the whole thing. A very good write. Right on! - Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 18, 2006

Sherry this far surpasses the challenge and is a superb poem with your masterful touch and lucid expressions!Beautifully done!

Love,
Eileen

Copyright � Sherry Gail Heim 2006