Our love
Fills our hearts and our souls
Thoughts of one another engulf our dreams
We reach out for each other, craving our touch
But we are apart
We are soul mates
Both of us spun in a life of our own dreams
Passing briefly, touching once
Then by the fate of our pathways
Forced again to separate
The longing within us both
Consuming the thoughts and acts of our lifetime
Why have we been apart so long
Where is our united path
Why is destiny and reality not the same
Driven by the unconscious dream
The heart knows it’s partner
For it beats in the same harmony
Never at peace until the echo of
It’s mate beats beside it
Eternity is ours
But for today, It is our unreachable destiny
Sherry, it's refreshing to see someone else who understands the meaning of soul mate! Very enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2002
Yes dear my soul mate is a beautiufl lady who commented above. This poem has so much
vital meaning to it. You have exhibited the skills of a very good writer. Bill
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2002
so well composed, and so very true, what a wonderful piece this is, truly wonderful, take care, i enjoyed this quite a lot, it says so much to me...thanks for the thoughts, take care..Mark...
Reviewed by Gilles
Reviewed on October 13, 2002
Well I can see that we see eye to eye on this call...
It is nice to see another as I am...!
And thank you for stoping by mine...
Blue eyed fish...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2002
My soulmate is playing hide 0r Seek. Is it time to Seek now? :-) Good poem.
Guess some people never find their true soulmate. I never did but then maybe I just never recognized her. It's a good poem and for me very emotional. Vic
Sherry, as my poem, GAMES, tugged your heartstrings and brought back memories, your poem has tugged at mine. Despite the physical distance and boundaries that now separate us, there is a special man who is always with me, in my heart, mind and soul. Ah, bittersweet is the precious love that deepens with distance!
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2002
"The heart knows its partner"...so beautiful! Thumbs up!
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2002
Awesome! You have really captured the essence of this....
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
Sherry this is so so lovely. I so enjoyed reading it. Soft and lovely. Floria
Incredible write that touched me deeply. Exceptional...
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
Yup, I thought so......You HAVE IT!! ;)
The gift of weaving words that is...Excellent!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
This is exceptional work and this part
Driven by the unconscious dream
The heart knows it’s partner
For it beats in the same harmony
Never at peace until the echo of
It’s mate beats beside it
Just blew me away. This is some very real emotion spilled out on the page. Would give it a 20 if possible
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Oh, my - I wish I knew...this hit me so hard with it's truth.
vital meaning to it. You have exhibited the skills of a very good writer. Bill
It is nice to see another as I am...!
And thank you for stoping by mine...
Blue eyed fish...
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Absolutely beautiful..
Thanks for your comments on mine.. :)
Trixie
The gift of weaving words that is...Excellent!
Driven by the unconscious dream
The heart knows it’s partner
For it beats in the same harmony
Never at peace until the echo of
It’s mate beats beside it
Just blew me away. This is some very real emotion spilled out on the page. Would give it a 20 if possible