Prisoner of Love (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 18, 2002

Hi Sherry,
I agree with everyone else here.
This is outstanding..

Thanks
Trixie

Reviewed on December 18, 2002

Many of us have regrets of the way things turned out in the past...but it is the future that we apply our culled knowledge and wisdom to...that counts now. Beautifully written and perfectly executed in its message and flow. Happy Holidays to you and yours, Sherry.
Amor

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2002

This is outstanding work Sherry, content and flow all fit perfectly.

Reviewed by Christopher Ingham (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2002

Strongly written and strangely moving. Chris.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2002

Wise words and thoughts shared throughout this write. Excellent!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

Sherry, fantasies often get me into trouble too. Realty is so hard to take and sometimes so unknown. A lot of sentiments here. A lot of heart ache.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

Gosh Sherry you were just too much for your knight! More womea than he could handle even in his fantasies. Wow. Would I be so lucky to be left in his condition. Just starry eyed slumped in a corner with a big smile on my face, for the exploration you allowed me of your being. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Hooves Of Fire (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2002

Very honest and well done all the way through, and especially the last part -
"So our fairytale did end, my love
When I stripped you of your soul
To live my fantasies and dreams
I had left you less than whole"
Very powerful writing!
Hooves

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)

Reviewed on December 13, 2002

our expectations can help develop or hobble others, very true...but I don't think your Lois Lane can be blamed - her fantasies just misplaced, perhaps.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 12, 2002

well writen..and thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on December 12, 2002

Strong images wrapped in honest thoughts. Bravo!

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2002

The truly majestic poet that lays within the depths of your words, shine brighter than the armor on any white knight!

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on December 11, 2002

brave honesty at its best - wonderful writing!

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on December 11, 2002

Whoa!! This hits that very sore spot! Excellent work Sherry, this one is haunting.

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)

Reviewed on December 11, 2002

Sherry,
So sad, but beautifully written. Never give up on the thought that your prince is out there exactly as you dream, without needing change.

The Voice

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 10, 2002

A brilliant write Sherry, sad what we do to those we love...

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on December 10, 2002

Wow! Great write. This piece has a whole lot of heart and soul.