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Candle In The Night (re-posted)
by Terry D. Robertson → (All Poetry by Terry D. Robertson)
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I am re-posting this poem. Somehow, it is perfect in edit stage, but when posted, it includes part of an entirely different poem. I don't know how this happened, as it was originally posted correctly. This is how it should read. Also from "The Library of Congress" collection.


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You want

You need

You feel

All the desires apparent in me

And you say that you care

But I just want you to see

That love is only real

When it is shared

And it is not that I don’t care

You must feel disappointed

Being forced on the other side

Waiting for reciprocation

Until your needs are satisfied

So don’t blow out your only candle

Darkness tends to dim the soul

Just let the flame flicker through the night

Until you have gained control

And if you had stopped, you'd know

I’m just like that candle in the night

On an empty table

In an empty room

Attempting to extend my light

But overshadowed by the moon

Terry D. Robertson

(C) 1979 Terry D. Robertson

 


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 Reviews of "Candle In The Night (re-posted)"
Reviewed by Linda Torrence (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Hi Terry,
This is such a powerful poem and says so much more, than the way it was posted incorrectly. You say so much about Love and Life in a few short sentences, but the meaning is so powerful. I think a lot of us can probably relate to what this poem is telling us? I know that most of your poems reach me, one way or another. They all make you look deep into your soul and ask yourself, does this apply to me?
ANOTHER GREAT POEM!
Linda

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Beautiful, heartfelt writing.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
A moonbeam unseen, the candlelight of lost love.

Ron


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