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Discharge
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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food for thought . . . !


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a debt - as to get the wolves off your back

a fly - so that it can land on your potato salad

a galley - out of their prows

a gas - methane to destroy the ozone layer

a gun - bullets with two Kennedy's names on them

a liquid - to quench one's thirst

a patient - but not before they pay their bill

a person - their services so they can become unemployed

a president - so a new one can come in and clean up the mess

a relief - excess weight by distribution of pressure

a ship - Titanic and its' passengers into icy waters

a soldier - to say thanks for serving our nation

a song - your voice so the world will hear it

a storm - bolts of lightning that light up the night

a vent - because it isn't good to keep it inside.

'2008' RLS


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 Reviews of "Discharge"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Love your definitions
A soldier...to say thanks for serving our nation!
Perfect words!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
Well-done, Robert!!! There's so much truths in this one!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on November 13, 2008
Well amen to that, we all need to learn how to stop holding our feelings inside. Well penned and much enjoyed Lance.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
.. you've discharged the duty you hereby set yourself extremely well, Lance :)) xx

Reviewed on November 13, 2008
EXCELLENT, Lance. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

"A soldier - to say thanks for serving our nation" (You're welcome. :) )

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
This was a feast, for thought! WELL DONE! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
Great write again Lance. One that sees much in the words you chose. Love the ending

a storm - bolts of lightning that light up the night

a vent - because it isn't good to keep it inside. For this gives us release and a chance to go on. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
Great thoughts here. This poem seems to have a pessimistic tone beset by hope that some of this will come true and get us out of the mess we are in. A lot of reasons for pessimism lately. Liz


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