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Unconscious Sufferer
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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'that's gratitude for umpteen years'


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Tossed his hands in the air
Had it up to here, would no
longer take the time to lay
one hand near her; she sat
down to cry, was looking
for sympathy, but it was no
where to be found, he closed
the door behind him softly;
more softly than she had
ever treated him - lied from
the start; was not love at
first sight, but supposedly
fell in love over time; he
often suspected that she
also cheated; the irony
was that she threw him
out, with nothing more than
the clothes on his back -
that's gratitude for umpteen
years, and on top of that
she played on her own
family's sympathy; but the
one that was really hurt
was the son - he was the
unconscious sufferer.


'2008' RLS


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 Reviews of "Unconscious Sufferer"
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 2, 2009
Such a heart tugging write my dear friend. The children are little pawns in an ugly trial. So sad but well done write. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Hugs....sensitive offering!!

Last year's hurt belong to last year.

And next year's New beginnings and Happiness awaits YOU.

I want to thank you for giving me your time and support with each kind word and thought!!

I am Wishing you a joyful New Year!!

Happy New Year Dear Lance!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Romantic You Write Right On...But: You As I We Will Overcome...

TRASK

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
The pains of loves lies! The wounded innocence in your writing

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Lance,
This touches my heart, dear friend. Its always the little children who suffer the most, they are too young to understand. Heartfelt write, a sad dose of reality.

Blessings and hugggs,
~Linda

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Lance, This tugs at my heart, life can sure throw us some punches...children do suffer silently, but when one hears their silence, they can work though it....time, love and prayer.
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Relationships can be so turbulent & stressing
& everyine does feel the hurt....
Your "Unconscious Sufferer" is a very deep emotion engraved
The anguish needs to be held in love somehow
children don't understand, but they surely feel
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Embraced
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Fantastic photograph! Children, the pawns in the middle are usually the ones who are hurt the most, fine, sensitive writing...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
The kids are always the losers in these situations. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
So true, Lance. The children are the silent sufferers. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Sad write, Lance; the children always suffer! Shame!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Let not the children suffer, but they do...This poem express anguish, torment, love forsaken, the gratitude played out. God bless the child...

Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Amen to that, RLS! A reality check is what people should be left with after reading your writing.

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on December 30, 2008
It's always the kids that suffer when parents seperate ... well penned, Lance.

(((HUGS))), love and Happy New Year!, Karla.


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