Let's Play Cards! (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 4, 2004

Loved the ending because I like to take the best shot and if it knocks me down I just come back also..
this was great about life being a card game and how we play them,,
thank you
Tommy

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

It makes you smile, doesn't it? Love discoveries. The kind that set you free, as this one did for you. Thank you. I need to be reminded, some times.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2004

Nice write ...
Excellent and so beautiful ....
K & K U

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on May 1, 2004

"it not whether you win or lose, but how you play the game that matters"

play on Retta

joy and starlight

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on May 1, 2004

Lots of lucky cards may be waiting for you. Franz

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2004

GREAT writing Rein...wonderful perspectives!

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

And you shall rise again, undaunted -- and go forth, and conquer all unwanted obstacles that impede your path to your destination. Sorry, got carried away... Retta, your words are truly inspiring! -- Jeff

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Loved this one, Reindeer. You've given me a lot to think about, too.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

The most important revelation you will ever make, excellent poem, Retta.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

An excellent, empowering poem. I love this, Reindeer.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Retta, sometimes it takes a quake to wake..The sleeping mountain is just that..asleep.
Take that new inspiration and run with it!
Wonderful write! Lisa

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

LOVE this, Reindeer! Needed the reminder, too. Dawn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Good for you Reindeer! You finally awoke to the fact
that we all have a choice, to make that no one else can
make for us! May you grow wiser with the knowledge.
Exceptional poem!Brava!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Rein this is excellent love the ending to this one.

Peg

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Fine!
Give me your best shot!
Maybe I can win this hand,
Maybe not.
But at least I’m back in the game!

Reindeer...what an excellent write you have posted here my friend...fantastic!!!!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Retta, with that attitude your bound to come out on top. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

On this fortieth day of Spring I Salute You, Sublime Poet!

"Let's Play Cards!" is one of a kind, and a unique flow of malice, innocence, and wisdom.

This is a true masterpiece to run through millennia.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Loved it Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Excellent, Reindeer! And it's your deal, and of course, in the game called life, the joker is always wild.

PS I love that drawing. I had it hanging in my basement; my cats tore it down. Bummer.