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Solitude
The lake’s smooth surface,
Is unbroken by the worries of the world,
Calm and soothing,
It flows softly,
From the waterfall into gentle pools,
That bubble laughingly at my feet…
Dragon flies swoop and dive,
Like miniature Red Barons,
In a World War I movie,
Now and then seized,
In the open mouth,
Of a rainbow trout…
It’s another world here,
One I have always loved,
The earth as it was meant to be,
Quiet and beautiful,
Life thrives here,
Like the tiny blue flower,
Growing alone in a field of weeds,
Watered by the morning dew,
And admired by me,
As I sit here watching it grow;
Marveling at its endurance and strength,
Its solitude and beauty,
Its determination to survive,
But what struck me the deepest,
Was its lack of fear,
At being alone…
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Marion
Carmen :-)
I always love your sooooo observant eye for imagery detail detail, makes me feel more interactive, a part of your piece, your world my friend!
~Nikki~
"Life thrives here,
Like the tiny blue flower,
Growing alone in a field of weeds,
Watered by the morning dew,
And admired by me,
As I sit here watching it grow;"
Enjoyed.
thank you
Tommy
this is GORGEOUS! at first, thought it was the texas bluebonnet, but then saw the mountains in the background...i love the mountains...and this write...so serene and calming...thank you for the free tranquilizer :) (and no side effects!)
((((((HUGS)))))) *that's another free tranquilizer* and love, karla. :)
Excellent write! Lisa
Bill
One I have always loved,
The earth as it was meant to be,
Quiet and beautiful,
As is this poem, Reindeer, quiet, beautiful, and excellent. And that is a superb picture; makes one feel as if they are standing right there. (Wish I was!)
One point - the Red Baron was WW1(according to Snoopy) There was even a record in the UK called Snoopy versus The Red Baron, but that was yibble yibble years ago.
Best
Ian
Love Tinka
excellently penned ...
Beautiful use of imagery in this piece!
Ann
but the essence of your concept makes it powerful and
full of wisdom! Yes it is fearless ,an example for us;-)!
Peaceful days to you!
Cynthia Castle
you are so nice ...always put the complete effort to make it the best ... thanks for sharing the poem .. it was so nice and the best one ....