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Solitude
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
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Solitude


The lake’s smooth surface,
Is unbroken by the worries of the world,
Calm and soothing,
It flows softly,
From the waterfall into gentle pools,
That bubble laughingly at my feet…

Dragon flies swoop and dive,
Like miniature Red Barons,
In a World War I movie,
Now and then seized,
In the open mouth,
Of a rainbow trout…

It’s another world here,
One I have always loved,
The earth as it was meant to be,
Quiet and beautiful,

Life thrives here,
Like the tiny blue flower,
Growing alone in a field of weeds,
Watered by the morning dew,
And admired by me,
As I sit here watching it grow;

Marveling at its endurance and strength,
Its solitude and beauty,
Its determination to survive,

But what struck me the deepest,
Was its lack of fear,
At being alone…



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 Reviews of "Solitude"
Reviewed by Edward Averill
Reviewed on June 1, 2004
Excellent imagery.. I'm glad I looked you up!

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Wonderful metaphors and pictures in this soothing poem. Enriching solitude.. Franz

Reviewed by M. Brown
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Retta this is simply magical and full of blissful serenity. Your closing stanza " . . . struck me the deepest . . ." The idea of being alone without feeling fear is, for me, magical. I can so clearly see the physical imagery dancing through this piece. Great work Retta!

Marion

Reviewed on May 18, 2004
You make all of your poetry come to life with that 'magic' you possess - beautiful!

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
Pours out tranquility here...lovele write...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
The imagery you've created took me into a journey of my own. Then you very cleverly turned it around, to bring in "Solitude", the subject, back into focus. But to point that solitude and loneliness are two different things. Good yarn!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Breathtaking work Rein!!!!
I always love your sooooo observant eye for imagery detail detail, makes me feel more interactive, a part of your piece, your world my friend!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Beautiful!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
This is beautiful. I especially like,

"Life thrives here,
Like the tiny blue flower,
Growing alone in a field of weeds,
Watered by the morning dew,
And admired by me,
As I sit here watching it grow;"

Enjoyed.

Reviewed on May 17, 2004
This is place I would love to be at and just sit and relax and enjoy natural at it best. Your words put there as I was reading.
thank you
Tommy

Reviewed on May 17, 2004
(((reindeer)))

this is GORGEOUS! at first, thought it was the texas bluebonnet, but then saw the mountains in the background...i love the mountains...and this write...so serene and calming...thank you for the free tranquilizer :) (and no side effects!)

((((((HUGS)))))) *that's another free tranquilizer* and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
I can smell this wonderful meadow of life...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
You have captured the essence of the wild flower, its beauty and its strength that makes the lonely stand up and shout...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
beautiful and peaceful............it comes from within.....with grace.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Beautiful world serene and at peace in your verses REIN!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Maybe I'm strange but I don't fear being alone either. Retta, you can always bring home the feeling of peace in your writes. I think that's the reason I enjoy them so much. Sometimes I need a rest and your den is always a comfort zone for me.
Excellent write! Lisa

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Retta, you never dissapoint me with you poetry. It is always excellent and deserving of praise and this one is no exception.
Bill

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
It’s another world here,
One I have always loved,
The earth as it was meant to be,
Quiet and beautiful,

As is this poem, Reindeer, quiet, beautiful, and excellent. And that is a superb picture; makes one feel as if they are standing right there. (Wish I was!)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Wonderful and creatively done. Thanks Retta

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
I want to visit this place. I really like nature poems like this but seldom write them myself.

One point - the Red Baron was WW1(according to Snoopy) There was even a record in the UK called Snoopy versus The Red Baron, but that was yibble yibble years ago.
Best
Ian

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
This is wonderfully written, Retta!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Wonderful place to recharge ones being. Excellent write Poet. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
A beautiful picture, a beautiful poem from a beautiful young lady...Peace thru Solitude, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 17, 2004
Beautiful tranquil piece Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
when we realizate and accept that we are really all alone in life, solitude becomes a gift for it allows us to embrace everything without fear of losing anything ...

excellently penned ...

Reviewed by Ann Piatt
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
So much serenity in this piece. I used to have a "secret" place by a river...under a huge old tree...that i would go to when i needed to be alone with myself...to think...or cry...or just "BE." I would bring along my journal and write. This made me remember that...and i thank you. It can be very difficult to be alone...and it takes some doing to get past the fear of it. Or maybe, somewhere deep down, it never completely goes away. I don't believe that humans were meant to live a solitary existance...

Beautiful use of imagery in this piece!

Ann

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
Reindeer, this is a brilliant poem, soft and beautiful
but the essence of your concept makes it powerful and
full of wisdom! Yes it is fearless ,an example for us;-)!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
Lovely tranquil poem, leaves one feeling the peace from what the poem eminates...

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
Beautiful expression, Poet! Peaceful Solitude ...something we probably do not seek enough! Enjoyed this! Left me with a very serene feeling!

Peaceful days to you!
Cynthia Castle

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2004
Excellent write ... so nice but could feel the loneliness in the write ...

you are so nice ...always put the complete effort to make it the best ... thanks for sharing the poem .. it was so nice and the best one ....




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