He said,
Tell me you love me,
And I understood,
It wasn’t words he wanted to hear,
Not at all…
It was a touch he wanted,
Me reaching out,
Feeling if he was real,
If I was,
But we weren’t,
I was dreaming,
And in the dream,
He was standing there,
Staring at me,
With love in his eyes,
Whispering for me to kiss him quick,
Before I woke up,
And he disappeared…
I reached out,
Felt his face,
The stubble on his chin,
Pricking my fingers,
Then my lips…
And I said,
“But aren’t you just a dream?”
And he answered me with another kiss,
And said;
“How can you believe I am not real?”
I felt the cool mist settle on my arms,
Wetting my hair with the night dew,
Felt my lips tingling where he kissed them,
Felt my heart beating so fast,
And I said;
“Because when I wake up,
You aren’t there…
And my heart is so empty,
My eyes so cold,
My mind so numb…”
Then he took my hand,
And placed it on his heart,
And I felt it beating beneath my fingers,
Felt his warmth beneath his shirt,
And I knew;
Our love was real.
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Reviews of "Aren't You Just A Dream?"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2004
I haven't ceased quaking since I've read this..OH my friend you have conveyed the truth in such meetings..meetings beyond this dimension..glorious..saved this..ty!!
this piece is so poignant and real..i sometimes think that dreams are more real than the waking world, and pieces like this only reinforce that perception, within me. a wonderful, soulful write, poet. good to read you again!
And Retta, the most important part...the love....is what's real. Perhaps one day the person will join the love and thereby complete the circle. Well done!
I want your dreams!!! Mine have been violent lately...hehe A perfect poem!!!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
WOW!!!… Reindeer, this was an absolutely pure pleasure to read!!!… It just flowed right into my very being with such ease!!!… Priceless poetry and artwork at its finest!!!… Excellent creation, Poet!!!… Dream on!!!
Retta,
Without dreams, we would miss so much enjoyment in life. They seem to make our life worth living, when there seems to be nothing else.
Awesome write.
Another beautiful work from your lovely heart! This poem had me thinking about a dream I once had and that still haunts me to this day. I feel as if I am always searching for that connection...the soul mate connection. I wish you all the beauty that life is and may love always be such inspiration for you. Thanks
Chanti
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
Retta,
Captured it this is so excellent so beautiful....
Peg
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Vesna :)
Robert
a hope filled dream.
the words are so nice
excellent and so nice...
both go hand in hand
~Rose~
You wrote a beauty here,it has sensuality,passion warmth mystery
fantasy and best of all...a happy ending,it is a true dream poem!
luv the feel to this poem and its articulated creativity ...
Sometimes our dreams become reality.
Phantastic.
this is GORGEOUS in presentation and meaning--beautiful! wonderful write and pic
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Love Tinka
Carmen :-)
I am suspecting dreams come true.
John
Beautiful and romantic composition .
Peter Paton
Without dreams, we would miss so much enjoyment in life. They seem to make our life worth living, when there seems to be nothing else.
Awesome write.
Lisa
Dreams are what inspire reality, never give up dreaming !
A stunning write and gorgeous graphics.
Warm Hugs
Elga
Chanti
Captured it this is so excellent so beautiful....
Peg
A very lovely poem, beautifully written!
Allen