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Indigo Skies
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
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Indigo Skies


The clouds blew away today at sunset,
Revealing the Hunter’s moon rising,
I felt as though I could touch her lovely face,
Trace every peak and valley I saw,
With my fingertip held just so…

I have always loved Indigo skies,
That deep blue with a copper hue,
Reminds me so much,
Of the color of your eyes…

I loved your Raven colored hair,
So black it was almost blue-
I can’t help thinking just how beautiful,
You were then…

We are Indian,
And the sun has colored our skin,
With bronze and reddish tones,
Your body so hard and smooth,
Like it was carved out of our red flint stones,

I love the colors of the world,
The brown and red clay earth,
The skies of Indigo blue,
Make me think of you…


We were nature’s savage children,
Brought up in the wild deep green forest,
Bathing in cool sweet waterfalls,
Flowing over the high cliffs,
Landing in beautiful blue-green ponds,

How much we loved swimming in them!
We lay together on the warm brown banks,
And dreamed of tomorrow then,
Do you remember?

How long ago it all seems,
When we lay together and dreamed,
Of where the future would take us,
How we would forget where we had been…

They buried you and your dreams,
In the Barren high desert,
Burned brown by the sun-
I always hated knowing that-

You should have been buried here.
It troubled me all these years,
Until I went to your grave,
And as the tears fell from my eyes,

The clouds blew away,
Revealing that lovely Indigo sky,
And I knew in my heart,
It was your way of telling me,
You had found your way home.

I smile now when the night falls softly,
And the dusk fades to that lovely shade of blue,
I think of you and how your spirit still flies,
In those lovely Indigo skies…





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 Reviews of "Indigo Skies"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Oh Retta, how did I miss this? Simply exquisite. Reads like a letter to a loved one. You weave emotion with the landscape...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Soul-stirring creation, Retta. Thank you for sharing this meaningful gift. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Beautiful piece! It's so moving Retta!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
An exquisite write. The internal and alternating end rhyme worked well here adding to the poem's gentle lyrical style. Image-rich and touching, Retta.

Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Emotions well-expressed. Beautiful write of the wonderful memories, even though there's some sadness in this. I love the picture very much!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Hauntingly sad, utterly beautiful, and stunning in its visual power.

Lovely, Reindeer!
Gina

Reviewed on May 26, 2005
beautiful and touching

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
What a beautiful piece Retta, and that pic, mmm love it...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
mighty fine penning here

best wishes

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
I love this! Bravo, Reindeer!

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
This is another superbly beautiful write Retta and the pic is to die for.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
exceptional imagery and atmosphere!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Reindeer, this is exceptional both poem and picture
transport me to where you are and I see what you see
and feel what you feel. Wondrous work!

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Simply breathtaking - in every respect. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
This is beautiful... to find life in death, by our surroundings... truly a gift from God...

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
The words are as pretty as the picture. Beautiful write Retta!

Jack

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Lovely written!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
The pic and the poem are both beautiful. Grand write.

Reviewed on May 23, 2005
simply divine poetry, reindeer, and the picture is absolutely breathtaking! awesome write; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Heart touching write with the beauty of on going life. The good memories are the best to keep :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Stunning package Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Hell of a photo there, Retta, to go along with simple a fantastic piece of writing. Tear-jerker. Good'un.

Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Reindeer,

The imagery comes alive in each richly hued word--such emotion, such beauty--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)


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