I became aware today,
That I am waiting,
Sitting in the corner staring out the window,
Looking around at life,
Waiting…
I watched the sun rise this morning,
Saw the eagle lift his heavy wings and take flight,
The coyote came by to say hello,
But he saw I wasn’t really here,
And padded softly away…
I was waiting.
I went outside in the falling snow,
Watched it land on my arms,
Then fall to the ground in its quiet way,
Looking to the east,
I saw a shadow on the horizon,
Black and ominous,
And I smiled.
So it comes now,
This storm building and blustering,
Trying to frighten me with its power…
But I am calm inside,
Filled with memories of another time,
It cannot touch me.
I know who I am now,
My ancestors once danced to Gods,
Seeking to appease their wrath,
But it is a new era now.
Science has replaced our myths,
And the wise among us,
Have discovered your secrets,
Knowledge has replaced fear,
And I am well armed.
It cannot touch me.
I know who I am.
What a wonderful line. I think there are many who have no clue of who they really are and the world is a very frightening place for them.
Well done, my friend.
Bobbi
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
"But I am calm inside,
Filled with memories of another time,
It cannot touch me.
I know who I am now"
More often than not you seem to write about something I'm going through at the moment or out of which I've just come. :-) Wonderfully potent writing, Reindeer.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Awww you've been waiting longer than it takes for one of Bransons Virgin trains to arrive, and that takes patience too.
All the best things are worth waiting and waiting and waiting for...
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Beautiful native reflections and has such a spiritual gathering in the verses. Just beautiful poetry ty for sharing this post.
If we discover nothing else in life, I hope we realize that we are invinceable unless we decide to give up. I hope someday we can all be strong enough to tell the forces of ill and evil "I am well armed so come if you must, do your best, I am waiting" Excellent writing
Pierre.
You, Dear Poet, are unique among us, so naturally, your work has a different tone and deepness that few of us understand, much less able to match. Like Scarlett O'Hara, I can see you shaking your fist at that damn storm - daring it to come near you! - Bill
Oh, boy, Retta, this poem has the tone I dearly love, steadfastness and willing to tak on what is on the horizon, and told in something that to me sounded faintly loke Poe. Yes! This is one of your better ones, and THAT is saying a lot.
I would want you by my side in any case of The Big Guns coming, Retta! Spiritually, you win the war. You have an incredible arsenal of spiritual words that best not be angered. The ancients let you know when it is time. You are spiritually ready, Retta!
Extremely compelling, and right up my street Retta, this is so powerful, light and dark delicately balanced, it empowers the spirit with the wisdom of our ancestors. Superb write.
Your adaptibility and resolution will make you triumph over all your challenges Retta !
Breathtaking and exceptional creative writing
Love that native Indian picture !
Peter
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Birgit and Roger
so much lovely imagery
so smooth and mystical.
Loved it thanks for sharing
enjoyed
Love & Peace
William
Regis
Vesna:)
I know who I am.
What a wonderful line. I think there are many who have no clue of who they really are and the world is a very frightening place for them.
Well done, my friend.
Bobbi
Filled with memories of another time,
It cannot touch me.
I know who I am now"
What a wonderful discovery you've made!
Love & Light,
Joseph
Love your work. . .s p i r i t. 'Pea' <3
This poem shows exactly what the golden pages of Poetry are "Waiting" from a true Poet.
Reading "Waiting" was an enchanting enriching moment.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
All the best things are worth waiting and waiting and waiting for...
Joselyn
Good one.
Ian
Love Tinka
This was absolutely marvelous! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Pierre.
Peace,
Carolyn
Thanks for stopping my way.....
Sage
Empowering! Courageous! Absolutely wonderful! Love the attitude of can do all through this inspiring write. Thank you! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Filled with memories of another time,
It cannot touch me.
I know who I am now,
That is a wonderful thing, as is this poem, Reindeer.
Felix
Eileen
Breathtaking and exceptional creative writing
Love that native Indian picture !
Peter