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Standing On The Rim...
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* Dark Poetry*


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Standing On The Rim…




I walk on crushed glass,
Cutting my feet,
Making them bleed,
Leaving a trail for others
Who dare to follow me,
Leaving a path,
Leading to a place,
I cannot stay…

If they are brave,
They will stand on the Rim,
Of the Edge of Time,
A place I call,
The End of my World.

And the beauty they would see!
The dark and lovely dreams…
They could listen to the empty chatter
Of a dying world-

The lies,
My god the lies,
They tell one another
And choose to believe!

Such empty promises,
Of love and life…
Such deception in the world below!
I choose to come here,

Where the film covering my eyes,
Is removed by the gentle breeze,
And I listen to the lovely oaks
Who never lie,
But reveal truth in ever sigh
Of the wind…

But you must listen carefully,
For they whisper softly,
And only those with a true soul can hear-
Only those who are without fear
Can stand here,
And stare at the cold world below,
And the lovely sky above,
And feel the love of the ancient ones,
Begin to flow once more in their veins…

I know the taste of their God’s shallow kiss,
The path that leads to nowhere in the end!
Know beyond all doubt,
The fate of those who trust too much!

Give me the burning Sun!
Let it scorch me white hot-
Flay me alive and peel off my skin,
Revealing the real me!

Thus I stand at the edge,
Of that dark abyss,
And know,
I shall not be missed,
Not by you!
Not by me…

Come,
Take my hand,
Give me my betrayer’s kiss,
And then let me go,
One last time…

And I shall fly,
Fly and be free,
Of all the things,
You believe about me…

I’m standing on the rim,
Swaying softly in the breeze,
Listening to the whispers,
Of my lovely trees…


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 Reviews of "Standing On The Rim..."
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Fantastic poetry for my library!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Many mixed emotions while reading this... a sign that there is more than one way to look at things. Wonderfully penned.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
..this has touched my soul...
Exquisite..thankyou soooo much..

Vesna

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
This brings a primal sigh.
Poems like this can only come from the rim, and poets seldom make it there.
You did.
Awesome as can be.
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
I’m standing on the rim
Swaying softly in the breeze
Listening to the whispers
Of lonely trees…
And the beat of my broken heart!!


I know this lovely feeling...
All I need to do is... jump
No more pain...no more tears...no more fears!!
Everlasting rest!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
I did not find darkness within this...for it spoke of a magical place that is on the same plane with those who believe in the creator's grand scheme for us all. On the plains where our ancestors roamed like the buffalo and all manner of wild beast that was under our rein and protection.
Amor

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
This one speaks to me of possibilities beyond us and I like that!

Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Great depth!

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Wonderful, Reindeer! Bravo! And a great picture too.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
i found this to be a stunning introspective write... well done!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Wow, a very painful one as far as physical. The edge of this world is not far off I believe. Awesome write..

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Very profound, deep heart touching write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
A place of peace is what this sounds like...great write again Reindeer...oh to be there...floria

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
A perfect picture to go with your words, great write.

Nancy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
One of your best! Absorbs all the senses, superb poetry!


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