I am glad that you let out all of your anger,fustrations and feelings in this poem in terms of trying to find happiness.I enjoy reading your poetry and hopefully I will read more poems from you in the near future,take care
Edwin
Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Welcome! And I enjoyed the depth of emotions in this wonderful poem. So many times we all share a measure of time in our own "personal hell."
Bronwen,
Welcome to AD! Sometimes I think that artists feel emotions deeper than others do. This sadness you describe seems all-consuming. I like how there's a general attitude toward not wanting to feel this way; a search for that silver lining. I like the way you leave it, too. Yes, time performs miracles. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Welcome to AD Ms.Phoenix (you not living in Tucson, are you?) :-)
"Outlet" has sadness connotations with sparks of hope, thoughts taken to the surface for a solitude that the heart don't want to feel.
Well done Missy!
Indeed, there is pain in which we all dwell that is uniquely our own and I can't help believing that someday we will understand that it's all for the betterment of our souls. I can relate to this.
Thank you Regis for mentioning this Poets name so as I could have my husband read to me her work. First, let me say her work indeed touches the soul and reflects a brilliant talent for writing poetry. I salute you Bronwen Winter Phoenix for a beautiful gift. Soar with that pen in your hand. I look forward to hearing your work again...
Your verses entered my soul and they echo there, Bronwen. I love your poem. I can relate. Thank you for sharing this offering. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes to you,
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Welcome to AD! I enjoy your poetry.
Cryssa
Edwin
Brilliantly executed and well versed!
Mark
Welcome to AD! Sometimes I think that artists feel emotions deeper than others do. This sadness you describe seems all-consuming. I like how there's a general attitude toward not wanting to feel this way; a search for that silver lining. I like the way you leave it, too. Yes, time performs miracles. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
"Outlet" has sadness connotations with sparks of hope, thoughts taken to the surface for a solitude that the heart don't want to feel.
Well done Missy!
Georg
Great write,
Pierre
Blessings, J'nia
Janet xoxoxo
Regis