Smoothly sailing slowly gliding
on lake of mirrored mountains
and glaciers of ancient ice
pure white and glistening
you live your days
Silently swimming among lofty evergreens
never touching their bowing boughs
as they revere your passing presence
from high above
you glide over them
on crystal water
you live your days
You could be a cloud
or an angel
But you are
Swan
serene and sweet
and ever so lovely
ENTRANCING...JUST PERFECT! THANK YOU DEAR REGIS...YOU HAVE DONE IT AGAIN AND I AM ALWAYS REWARDED SO HANDSOMELY WHEN I DECIDE TO DELVE INTO YOUR POSTED ARCHIVES. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS
a timely piece, since swans have returned here, along with the egrets and cranes, etc. etc. today, however, they are shaking snow off their wings and tail feathers.
So beautiful is the swan, as is this tribute to same...when seen on a lake, they seem so relaxed, calming in its effect on those that watch them glide thru their world...Regis, this is so pretty, I have to save this...thanks for the beauty...Peace thru the Write, Ed & Rufuz
Lovely Regis....a beautiful "swan song".....graceful words echoing the majesty of one of nature's most graceful creatures.
Reviewed by Dan Summerfield (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Regis;
As delicately precise as a pas de deux in Swan Lake. Wonderful imagery, especially the silent swimming of lofty evergreens. Imagery of reflected images. Very creative, terrific observation.
As you can probably tell, I liked this very much.
Dan S.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
STUNNING write...thanks for sharing this, Regis!
Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
mmm yes indeed Regis 'How could I do anything
but love you?'how could one.Beautifully delicate,definately captures the swan on the water..excellant
Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
There's just something about swans isn't there?
Lovely poem Regis
Andrea
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
etched upon the lake of my mind..
wonderfully rich..just beautiful- Donna
the swans part the
lilies and glide over the river"
I heard that many years ago and never forgot it. this poem is a sweet reminder
♫ Jackie
This is awesome, awesome, awesome.
The picture is beautiful and so are your words.
You are very gifted.
Love and Blessings,
Judith
Gina
Peace~~and~~love:Denise
excellent write
William
A beauty and graceful just like the swan flows...
lady Peg
~Rose~
TRASK
Thanks for adding more beauty to my day.
I do so enjoy your work.
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami en texas, karen lynn. :D
paix et amour a toi!
Love Tinka
you chose a wonderful subject...floria
Carmen :-)
As delicately precise as a pas de deux in Swan Lake. Wonderful imagery, especially the silent swimming of lofty evergreens. Imagery of reflected images. Very creative, terrific observation.
As you can probably tell, I liked this very much.
Dan S.
but love you?'how could one.Beautifully delicate,definately captures the swan on the water..excellant
Lovely poem Regis
Andrea
or an angel
This is excellent imagery!!
A most excellent write!
Love, Sheila