I felt I saw too much beauty on the uncertain edge of a snowstorm before the first flakes started to float in the electrified air I watched the swirling leaves and litter turning twirling whirling against the red brick wall of a back alley I felt a force benevolent but strong just before the snow I thought my heart would fail from too much beauty on the rim of the storm I exhaled and saw my breath vanish as the first flakes started to fall I saw
Absolutely beautiful Regis, so much phenomenal beauty in nature, that we can almost liken it to a love affair. We experience it, we relish it, we live it, we absorb it, stand in awe of it's magnificence and how it touches our heart and makes us feel.
I'VE HEARD IT SAID THAT TRUE BEAUTY IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER...OBVIOUSLY, YOU REFLECT THIS STATMENT TO BE QUITE TRUE IN THIS OFFERING. THANK YOU REGIS. LOVE, BLESSINNGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2010
very emotional--a beautiful poem to frame somewhere
Excellent poetry Regis...I don't know how I missed this one, but I'm so glad to have returned to search for this! Blessings and the favor of God be upon your life! Thanks for sharing and for caring!
Much Love,
Margaret
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
This one makes me want to see what or who you saw, then. The picture is a lovely winter scene, by the way; I have seen so many....
Wow! Brilliant poem! Flows perfectly and smoothly. It is filled with much emotion, is heartfelt and beautiful, and deeply touching. I love the story you tell with your words and the picture you paint. The image above the poem is beautiful too. I think this is one of your best poems.
Hi Regis, And a romantic, too! "I felt a force
benevolent but strong" ... like your words, my friend. And that photo has to be by your place... I love that photo... it reminds me of a poem I wrote on blackness and sleep.... thank you, again, for sharing your words...
"On the uncertain edge of a snowstorm" ... what a creative and fantastic line! Amazing where we see that special someone, isn't it. Beautiful visuals. Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 4/4/2004 - me again-THAT is an incredible photo, don't know why I didn't say that the first time.
I love this, and that picture is so beautiful, it is a fitting name, and I like the tightness of the simplicity of words in this. I love work that doesn't need to be striving so hard to cough up a thesaurus to get across a simple message. This shows skill, not pretension.
Unbelievable...this is one of the most beautifully spoken poems I have read in a long time. I myself have experienced a moment like this. It is like an ecstasy, it comes very rare. You were able to capture the beauty on film and to write about it...in words so that we too can feel it...absolutely magnificent.
I just read three of your poems and I love the way you make use of small number of words, to create an all encompassing canvas to show details and nuances that with but, oner brush, a 21/2" trim brush at that, manage to captue and expound on every thing that, that canvas can hold. Awesome talent, Thank you for reviewing the 2 poems of mine, and I invite yoi to read He is Risen, My Children, Ode to forebode, and I cannot recieve you, and I guess I would love it if you read them all, as somehow , I think your input is important and valable. Art
Of all the poetry I have read or yours (and I have read a lot), this one had the most impact. It is simply the most powerful piece I have ever seen in print. It brims and overflows with love and brings with it a sense of awe. You have experienced true beauty and it has touched you profoundly. I don't experience envy often (finding it a fruitless emotion)but I felt it here. How I wish I could express as deeply as you have. Magical and enchanting!
Love Chanti
Your are a true poet with all the magic in your soul you could never run out of words! The "Beauty" you seek is already in your heart!
Reviewed by Bella Beaudoin (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
Regis,
The more I get to look around at your site, the more I am inspired and impressed. Your words are always eloquent, and tey evoke emotional responses from some far recess of my mind. Keep up the good work!
This is good as is. I think you don't need to do much tinkering with it. If you are going to use the ! at the end, you need to punctuate the whole thing. All or nothing, that's the rule. Otherwise, I like it as it is.
Exquisite! Everytime I dated one guy- it snowed
and it was romantic & I'll never forge the
falling wet snowflakes or him..
thank you for reminding me ;) Donna
Wow! Breath-taking picture (did you draw this?) and poem. Thanks for this beauty :)! Now that the snowstorm is over, want to go Jellyfish 'N with me?
:)Love,
Sandy
Beautiful poetry Regis, and it is almost as exhilarating as seeing inner beauty for the first time in spite of the exterior trappings. Happy Easter. Bill Murray
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
great write Regis.
CHALLENGE: take something that appears ugly and make it beautiful by crafting your poem with the right words.
Sorry I really thought I reviewed this one.....but my PC had been playing tricks on me I did not read or reviewed in 2 days now.
I ussually open about 12-15 pages go off line read and review.....then as I want to send the darn thing freezes up on me...then I must reboot....then It become quite confusing whether my reviews did go through or not
No you did not offend me in anyway love...don't think you could ever do that to em ever!!
I love this, and that picture is so beautiful, it is a fitting name, and I like the tightness of the simplicity of words in this. I love work that doesn't need to be striving so hard to cough up a thesaurus to get across a simple message. This shows skill, not pretension.
Regis, this is stunning poetry - so visual and emotionally powerful that it just causes the sharp intake of breath that you capture here so well in words! That bittersweet feeling of wanting to enjoy something SO much that you almost want to defer that moment of enjoyment so that you can savour it long and for it never to disappear - no matter how fleeting in actuality! Also the snow-thing! REAL Canadian snow must be WONDERFUL and those of us who have only thoughts of UK slush to base our experience on are given a fantastic treat of the real thing in this wonderful write. Thank you! KB
Probably got a lot of snow up there Regis. I love the snow but I've had enough for awhile. You poem made beauty out of the ice wonder. It is creative and original. peace. G
Truly-Beauty is Only Skin Deep,i.e. Take Off All Lipstick, Makeup, The Breast Implants,Face Up Lifts,Bonded White Enameld Teeth,Invalid Smiles_
......Holy Cows It's Another Ugly Wasted Human Useless Being!!!
Excellent_Thanks Always Your Intelligent Reviews & Comments!!
TRAAK
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
Hey Reg, this indeed had a certain breath to it, in anticipation, the watch, and we could feel the beauty flow in like suddenly, that had an amazing feel, ty Reg, Al
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
Absolutely fantastic! Excellent imagery in just a few words.
Awesomely beautiful Regis... thank you for sharing your gift with the world...
you must publish a book of your poems so even more people can enjoy your gift.
ann
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
Oh, my, Regis...
The combination of finely crafted verse and graphic is a definite
breath-stealer.
You've done it again...image maker!
Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
What magical imagery! And what a beautiful tribute to the sight of another person, you have a way of writing that gives us hope we might all feel that way toward someone someday. Thanks for this!
Monette
Like the snow queen.....she appears with the cold....where does she goe when the kiss of spring warms the earth......hmmmm this could be a part two for this poem.......lol
Regis when I read you...I take a deep
breath...because I know I won't be
breathing in between the first and last
lines.....love this...floria
I love the picture..
It is a powerful poet, indeed, who can not only give us welcome pause in the reading, but let our eyes 'see' what the poet sees... I quite left my chair and stood, 'looking'. You transport, Regis.. you bring me there. Wonderful work! katy xox.
Beauty only describes this partially, as it is also, pretty, wonderful and vividly descriptive, Regis...this type of poetry I understand, str8 to the point, obvious etc...sorry I am having a problem with deciphering alot of others poems of late...Peace thru the write, Ed & rufuz
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Just lovely,
Angel
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Much Love,
Margaret
From Lena Kovadlo... ...Thank you, Lena.
Lena
very deep!
Nicole
benevolent but strong" ... like your words, my friend. And that photo has to be by your place... I love that photo... it reminds me of a poem I wrote on blackness and sleep.... thank you, again, for sharing your words...
In Spirit,
Bear
Harold M. Nash
Sheila
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 4/4/2004 - me again-THAT is an incredible photo, don't know why I didn't say that the first time.
I love this, and that picture is so beautiful, it is a fitting name, and I like the tightness of the simplicity of words in this. I love work that doesn't need to be striving so hard to cough up a thesaurus to get across a simple message. This shows skill, not pretension.
God Bless!
Sharon
Unbelievable...this is one of the most beautifully spoken poems I have read in a long time. I myself have experienced a moment like this. It is like an ecstasy, it comes very rare. You were able to capture the beauty on film and to write about it...in words so that we too can feel it...absolutely magnificent.
Smiles...Gypsy Girl
Janet
Of all the poetry I have read or yours (and I have read a lot), this one had the most impact. It is simply the most powerful piece I have ever seen in print. It brims and overflows with love and brings with it a sense of awe. You have experienced true beauty and it has touched you profoundly. I don't experience envy often (finding it a fruitless emotion)but I felt it here. How I wish I could express as deeply as you have. Magical and enchanting!
Love Chanti
The more I get to look around at your site, the more I am inspired and impressed. Your words are always eloquent, and tey evoke emotional responses from some far recess of my mind. Keep up the good work!
"Beauty"
Very breathtaking, and an enjoyable read.
Words of the heart!
Great Sharing Regis,
Gwendolyn
and it was romantic & I'll never forge the
falling wet snowflakes or him..
thank you for reminding me ;) Donna
:)Love,
Sandy
Peace,
Joseph
This is the sweet side of divine.......ty, Dani
CHALLENGE: take something that appears ugly and make it beautiful by crafting your poem with the right words.
Just love This so much!!
Sorry I really thought I reviewed this one.....but my PC had been playing tricks on me I did not read or reviewed in 2 days now.
I ussually open about 12-15 pages go off line read and review.....then as I want to send the darn thing freezes up on me...then I must reboot....then It become quite confusing whether my reviews did go through or not
No you did not offend me in anyway love...don't think you could ever do that to em ever!!
Warm love Tinka
Always at your best and this is no exception - another winner!
Hank
~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel ~
Reindeer
Gina
an execllent piece
William
......Holy Cows It's Another Ugly Wasted Human Useless Being!!!
Excellent_Thanks Always Your Intelligent Reviews & Comments!!
TRAAK
written it. Peace, Love & Plenty of Time to Write,
Phyllis
you must publish a book of your poems so even more people can enjoy your gift.
ann
The combination of finely crafted verse and graphic is a definite
breath-stealer.
You've done it again...image maker!
Monette
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)
~Chrissie
just lovely
pax
Anita
:)
breath...because I know I won't be
breathing in between the first and last
lines.....love this...floria
I love the picture..
Love n Peace
Ch'erie
I always have loved this picture and your verses are the perfection of framing it in more beauty exquisite poetry.{Love bio}
Ladye Peg
from too much beauty
Oh what a feeling that is!!! You describe it so well and your poem truly is beautiful.
Andrea
It is perfectly mated with the art!Very exciting poetry!
Great write............mind the humor.
Excellently written!
Love, Sheila