I remember
November’s tryst -
A brief precious eternity.
You were here
And all that mattered.
It was idyllic.
I mocked the moan of wind,
The lashes of rain
On the window pane,
Welcoming winter.
I grasped
The promise of you,
The assurance of your warmth.
In my arms
As I held you
I basked in your enchanting aura.
In that golden time
On the other side of never,
On the edge of forever,
It was all I needed.
But the intenseness,
Like that of a sudden summer storm,
Was switfly spent and squandered;
And much too soon
All that was left
Was whine of wind
And rush of rain,
And a lover’s whispered sigh...
After the tang of the falling fall colored leaves, comes November - stil in it's glory of those leaves, and Thanksgiving time and glad for it. A time of healing it seems , and I can feel it coming with this reading of this poem. you will heal and go on, Regis. to another November Month.
Reviewed by Natosha Davis (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2011
Can relate to this poem Especially like the lines "On the other side of never, On the edge of forever"
"You were here...and all that mattered" ... yes. Soft was the wind and the rain and the winter ... until ... oh, I know this, all too well. Love and hugs, Elizabeth
This is so beautiful and so emotional. Flows really well too, which is important. One of your best I think. You definitely need to put a book together of non-limerick poems.
Just a little thing I noticed - your Copyright line is too tiny (size-wise). Again it is probably the AD editor going bonkers but I thought I'd let you know. You might have the size fine on your end but it's not on mine.
This really is quite well written, so many things about it that I love, A lover's whispered sigh, nice way to end it.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2011
"On the other side of never,
On the edge of forever"
Very nice. November's always been a favorite month of mine - it is honest in its bare display; all inhibitions shed. It has its own special charm; it is a time of revelation and all at once a time of withdrawal.
Excellent Limericks Regis!! You have to watch Sweet November! It is a beautiful love story that was only supposed to last for the month of November...Love, and peace always! ~Chessly
Regis, this is powerful. I made the mistake of reading the many comments and lost my reaction...a brief interlude on a winter's night? But, no...the lover's sigh expresses only the regret of having spent the passion too quickly...with no hope for an encore?
I hope this is true, because if it is, it is so bittersweet that even I would have loved to live it. On the other hand, if you didn't experience it, it is just another example of your brilliant writing when it comes to love.
Both November and the slipperiness of the quick-silvered tryst are captured eloquently and elegantly in your lovely words and phrasing here, Regis. I particularly like
On the other side of never,
On the edge of forever
... such echoing and counterbalanced thoughts are balanced as if on a pinhead/knife-edge in eternity's timeframe and in the lovers' momentarily combined experience. Haunting and beautiful. xx
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2011
Breath taking sweet man..just like you...sighhhh...Hugsss
Send me a basket full of your November trysts Regis. If they can inspire me as this one did you, I will write 'til the pen and paper cease to be. It is only the "swiftly spent and squandered" that concerns me. Your last line is like sealing a letter with a kiss, perfect. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Love on the edge. You started this well and then with the expert hand of the poet, you turned this all around. It is like the dream where the boy and girl are out and having a wonderful time, and just as they are bout to kiss the girl wakes up. She is disapppointed, alone, and no boy. Thank you for sharing this November Tryst.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
I like the way you opened this piece, because you had me on the edge the whole while, knowing the past tense was used but seeing the beautiful imagery. Then your use of nature in the ending lines to show a contrast is inspiring. Excellent write, Regis. Love and hugs,
Sheila
My goodness Regis, you have an extra ordinary gift!
Thank you so much for sharing so passionately.....
Appreciate your honesty! May the Lord bless and
comfort you on every side! Keep on writing!!!
Much Love,
Margaret
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2011
A beautiful moment in time. we need so many more of these...moments and poems by you.
...SHARED WITH SUCH LOVELY PHRASES AND WELL DRAWN IMAGERY...I ENJOYED...YOUR BITTERSWEET MEMORIES. THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Very well done. I can feel the hurt & pain that your
heart.
We've all experienced it at some point in our lives.
Reading it I could also feel that pain that I have
experienced too.
You are The Magician Of Poetry sir &have a wonderful
way of weaving a tale when you write.
...'On the other side of never,
On the edge of forever'...
Heartfelt, delicious, glorious, yet with that tinge of the often painful truthful truth as always...
Love your work and heart Dear Regis...
xoxox :-D
Sometimes I think it is best when we stay together for only as long as the intense passion rages then leave before the mood changes to indifference...perhaps that is truly what a tryst is and perhaps it leaves us with the best memories of loving. Beautiful poem, offered up from the heart and served with a side of bittersweet.
Take care,
Sherry
Reg, this is simply incredible. It's like you reached into my heart and looked back through my memories. Beautiful work from a soul who has clearly been there too.
Just a little thing I noticed - your Copyright line is too tiny (size-wise). Again it is probably the AD editor going bonkers but I thought I'd let you know. You might have the size fine on your end but it's not on mine.
Lena
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
On the edge of forever"
Very nice. November's always been a favorite month of mine - it is honest in its bare display; all inhibitions shed. It has its own special charm; it is a time of revelation and all at once a time of withdrawal.
I've enjoyed your romantic interpretation.
I would not call this bitter sweet.
Excellent writing!
Gina
Ron
On the other side of never,
On the edge of forever
... such echoing and counterbalanced thoughts are balanced as if on a pinhead/knife-edge in eternity's timeframe and in the lovers' momentarily combined experience. Haunting and beautiful. xx
peace be with you
William
Just think, Regis, how rich and fullfilling life
could be with a tryst a month. -gene.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Sheila
I like this a lot. This has a powerful expression. Thank you for sharing!
Sandie Angel :o)
I'm saving this one..
Much Love,
Vesna :)
Anna
Thanks for sharing.
-Mamta
This is written with such tenderness and feeling. But alas, love goes wrong too often.
Take care, my friend.
Mary
Thank you so much for sharing so passionately.....
Appreciate your honesty! May the Lord bless and
comfort you on every side! Keep on writing!!!
Much Love,
Margaret
Your work is exceptional for its versatile creativity.
Much continued success-
Barbara Henry
Very well done. I can feel the hurt & pain that your
heart.
We've all experienced it at some point in our lives.
Reading it I could also feel that pain that I have
experienced too.
You are The Magician Of Poetry sir &have a wonderful
way of weaving a tale when you write.
Stephen Pollard
Daniel
On the edge of forever'...
Heartfelt, delicious, glorious, yet with that tinge of the often painful truthful truth as always...
Love your work and heart Dear Regis...
xoxox :-D
This is absolutely marvelous!!
the best!
Micki
hug
Kathy
Blessings,
Christine
Be always safe,
Karen
blessings and peace to you,
ann
Take care,
Sherry
Cheers,
Dan
with fine word choice, image and phrasing
and emotional depth.
Yes!
John
Newfie Hugs, Rose
God bless,
Lew
PEACE
Tony
Blessings,
Christine
The picture works so well.
*sigh*
John