Lights Out (poem) by Regis Auffray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 23, 2014

The lines in this poem paint a picture for all to see. You've filled the empty canvas with beauty and vivid imagery that is astounding.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on August 17, 2014

How very sad when loves light diminishes. Well done /Regis

hug
Kathi

Reviewed by Shervin Hojat, Ph.D.

Reviewed on August 13, 2014

Very touching. It has to be felt to be written. I think you are blessed to experience that love - not many do.
Shervin

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on August 10, 2014

Filled with the pain of a love that is lost to a heartbroke soul!...M

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 9, 2014

WHEN THE PAIN OF A BROKEN HEART IS EXPRESSED LIKE THIS...THE TRAGEDY OF IT IS ENCRUSTED WITH SUCH BEAUTY THAT ONE...ALMOST...
THANKS FOR THE SHARE, REGIS. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on August 5, 2014

So sad my friend, but from your beautiful heart
only the way you can compose the feelings....

Love and Light,
Lily

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 30, 2014

I hear you loud and clear. I maintain that love is a dirty word. There is more despair and pain associated with love than anything else, including love.

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on July 27, 2014

Regis, The LIGHT AND LOVE shines through this poem you gift to the world. Beautiful. Thank you.
ann

Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2014

The wind has lost its song and the willows wail in darkness.

Excellent lines. A sweet poem about lost love.

Reviewed by Teresa Walker

Reviewed on July 23, 2014

Beautiful display of words and meaning! Rainbow's are meant to give you hope, and love is suppose to last forever. Love these days tends to do as the rainbow does, fade away. The display of it is amazing and the beauty of the colors all consuming. The promise in it for us is everyday a new day, with hope around the bend.

Felt these words and my mind saw the pictures, especially the stars crying tears...totally moved!!
Hugs and blessings my dear friend!
Teresa

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 22, 2014

quite moving, Regis ... i hope you find that spark soon ...

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on July 21, 2014

This I will say: There is hope, there will be a change, so that even the wind will sing again! Good work, Regis!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 21, 2014

looks as if one has fallen into an abyss
pray the sun will shine again showing the true way of love
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Vicky Semones

Reviewed on July 20, 2014

Deeply personal & painful. Beautiful imagery. Yes,this is how it can be...and whatever your loss, I hope you know the spark is only dormant and will ignite anew one day... Best, Vicky

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 20, 2014

Oh, I know someone who did this to me as well. It's very painful. Bless you, Regis.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

Such searing pain in these words, Regis, and such a heart-felt poem!
Blessings, Chris

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

...poet seeking to gain understanding...from the pain of lost
love...trying to grow from it...knowing...only then...the
experience becomes a "reward"...a new hue of love...Creates
an emotional spark with reader through metaphors...and posted message...desire for love is the motive force for action...
Thank you Regis, for sharing your thoughts provoking, creative
poem; never know when the spark is about to hit you again.
Blessings!

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

Beautiful!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

There is a certain depression that sets in when one loses a love. The sooner one can get past that sorrow and move forward, the better. I hope you are writing for creative expression rather than experience.

Ron

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

Horribly sad feeling, isn't it? Thank you for expressing it so well.

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

I absolutely got caught up in this beautiful lament...what an illuminating write of the fickleness of the heart. great write, regis...pmedlin

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

Sometimes I believe that love is, at best, fleeting. Today I love, tomorrow I am not sure, the next day I hate and then by some crazy miracle, I am madly in love again. I suppose it is the strong ability to forgive combined with always believing that love will win in the end that makes it work. Without a doubt, love is a roller coaster ride through a battlefield. The canvas you paint leaves us with a sad picture but I hope that in your heart, you too, know that in the end, true love will always win.

Reviewed by Kathy Parenteau

Reviewed on July 19, 2014

Beautiful emotional piece. Never lose hope, love finds it's way to everyone, it just comes softly and unexpected.

Kathy J Parenteau

Reviewed by lois christensen

Reviewed on July 18, 2014

So many people still have love for you, Regis, don't feel lost and alone.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2014

Very touching...sad...don't let go your hopes..
beautiful poem
my best wishes...neerja

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 18, 2014

Hey Regis, don't feel you are searching in vain, I still love ya...;-) e

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 18, 2014

Regis
Sad poem but done very well! Regis style !
Blessings
Peace love and light
Amber

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 18, 2014

It's sad when love turns that way. I hope I, myself, never be that way. I have too much love inside me for everyone.

An emotional write, and very heartfelt!!!

Hugs,
Sandie