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A Simple Conversation
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It’s been three years
since she left this world.
So long since I felt someone
a living breathing life
that walked next to mine.

Everywhere I turn they torture me
flaunting those mysteries
about the opposite sex;
A constant reminder
that I am alone.

I tried a simple conversation
the weather, a shopping trip,
her hairdresser’s birthday,
a trip to the ocean.

My heart is racing
Her mouth is moving
but I can’t hear the words;
I feel as though I’m melting.

A simple conversation . . .
The aromatic perfume
hypnotized my senses.
Red lipstick and long hair
quickened a carnal urge.
I felt it breaking
through this cocoon.
The light around her
accentuated even the sidewalk.

A simple conversation . . .
She touched my hair
spoke softly in my ear.
My hands are trembling
Thank God!
She walked away.

My mind unravels all her words
I am left helpless
desperately trying to cultivate
her whispers;
from a simple conversation.


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 Reviews of "A Simple Conversation"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
better to have known (even momentarily) than to have not known at all...

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Hey Tim Hey Tim ... Wonderful Wonderful ... What to say ?? What to say ?? You did a marvellous one .. So beautiful my dear friend ... I loved the flow of the write ... Superb ...


Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Wow, Tim.... you got me with this one.. touching...and tender...
Jenni

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Very expressive, vivd images, sadly beautiful;-)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
8-28-02

Keep the Beautiful Memories, ,i.e. Don't Look Back...

TRASK

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Beautiful write. Feelings just play around with us sometimes - and I hate it when it does that.. ;)

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
The imagery and flow are wonderful in this--the emotions so vibrantly expressed...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
This is wonderful Tim, such strong expression of the frustration and longing.

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Great example of the anxieties we go through
regarding the opposite sex.
You really brought it together and made it felt

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Excellent write.. vivid!!

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
at a loss for any "review" type words...my heart is simply feeling this one

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Timothy;

I almost felt as if I were there, a silent observer.


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