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Open Your Eyes
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You were always there
so far away,
yet so close to me
God only knows
how I tried
to open your eyes
but you were asleep,
like a star out of reach.

So I go back and return
to this scene
one chance in a million
as falling stars go.
In my mind
I try to live without you
but deep in my heart
I can’t let you go.

Remember
for me
this man
you once knew,
and I
will forgive
what your heart
can not do.

I see you dancing
and spinning
on diamond lit
floors.
The past
falling behind
as you open
these doors.

But hey!
That’s just a dream
and I am a dreamer.
If only
you could see
what I
feel is true
this would be
but a fraction
of what I see
in you.

Help me to live
to live once again.
Leave
all these shadows
that scare up
the wind.

See me clearly
and learn to believe
that love
goes beyond
what eyes
cannot see.

Search in your heart
you will find me.






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 Reviews of "Open Your Eyes"
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2002
nothing wrong with being a dreamer....hope she gives her heart a thorough searching.

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2002
very moving...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2002
Absolutely enchanting, Tim, loved it.

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2002
painted into a corner i use your imagery to find my way to clearity

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 13, 2002
Wonderful images.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Beautiful images. Liked this a lot.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Tim,
I agree this piece speaks volumes, it is beautiful. Your words always touch the reader deep within.

Maria

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Timothy, this is so touching and so beautiful. Floria

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Incredibly romantic and
beautiful. Loved this!!!

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Yes!!!!!!!In the shadows.

Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Just so full of emotions,feelings and very imagery..liked it a lot.{-:

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
Love the word picture you have painted...as lovely as a trip to celestial places...

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
excellent verses.. beautiful ending.. search in your heart; you will find me.. speaks volumns.


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