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Echoes
by Timothy Michael writerwanted@hotmail.com → (All Poetry by Timothy Michael writerwanted@hotmail.com)
  
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Evening shadows stretch
into the front room
we lit the space
over our coffee.

Perplexed and twisted
I etched my words
you hollowed out the empty day

with everything
you had to offer
filling the nights.

I watch,longing
for those memories,
echoed
all around.

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 Reviews of "Echoes"
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 13, 2003
Timothy,
"I watch,longing
for those memories,
echoed
all around."
It is haunting at times! This is a deep, and great write!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on May 13, 2003
loved your way with words
enjoyed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Verrrrry well written!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
A KOOL WRITE TIM

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Well done. Like it muchly. Ted is insane but harmless. [smiles]

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Simple but that's all it needs to be. One little nitpick: It's Echoes. You have a possessive here when you want a plural. (Damn grammar goddess). Short poem but sweet.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
This is so melancholy Timothy, I feel tears inside;-)Bless you~

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
this is lovely. LOL to Ted

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
YOU YOU YOU DID DID DID THAT WELLLLLLLL


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