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My Brother Jac
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I am sorry about the lack of Formating to this poem
but for some reason Authorden won't let it format when I posted it up,
I hope you enjoy it anyway.
Steve

My brother Jac I love him dearly

I'd tell him but... he would not hear me,

He'd doubt my words and think lied,

that I had some alteria motive hid inside,

He would not believe I was sincere

yes I could tell him but... he would not hear,

you see my brother believes the whole world hates him

conspires behind his back and slates him,

For past misdeeds,too long forgotten,

he believes we look on him as rotten,

where as in fact, I for one,

recall so little of what was done,

In youth, or in much latter years,

it's so sad it brings my close to tears,

To think that though I love him dearly,

my brother Jac will never hear me.

 

By S E Ralph

4-12-2013   


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 Reviews of "My Brother Jac"
Reviewed on December 21, 2013
I understand the pain of this situation so personally. So poignantly and honestly penned. Perhaps you should try, just once more.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 6, 2013
So sad. My sister is kind of like that, but I think it's just mostly menopause. Her son, however, has been banished from the family for verbally abusing her and other bad behavior that he may not deserve because his mother was an instrument in his making.

Back to Jac. By reaching out in this poem, you may have reached him. I remember when my father and his brother came together at their mothers funeral and buried the hatchet. Once he gets over his depression and paranoia, if he is still alive, he may be the one seeking you out. Time has a way of healing old wounds.

It's probably not AD's editor, but your word processor. When you copy your document, make sure that you "paste it to match style" for "paste special" in a simpler format like text (.txt) or rich text format (.rtf) rather than the usual "document" because later versions have a lot of hidden formatting that the editor can't handle.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 5, 2013
It is sad but I appreciate the sincere tone that you express through your words here, Ralph. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on December 5, 2013
It can be read and understood. I like it. I think we all have a brother, son, daughter, etc who won't hear us.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 5, 2013
this is such a sad right for him and all of you
budd


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