again, you
make my
blood run,
naked ( hot- red
white- cold)
veins numb?
run run run...
stop.
again, i
clutch
my own
sore
truths
raw.
run run run... stop.
again, you
make
the past, now...
now, past?
heart-
beats
run run run...
stop!
again...
tears, dry
wet, wrung
truths
sung
out, and
i...
stop.
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Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2003
your stream of consciousness writing is so fluid...takes me from the first syllable to the last in one breath I keep trying to hold back...so it won't end....awesome as ever! **Mari**
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
Lovely...enjoyed it.
~E
"...again...
tears, dry
wet, wrung
truths
sung
out, and
i...
stop..."
Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
I had to stop and read a couple of your poems, as I try to do with everyone who ever comments on my work. Not only am I NOT disappointed... I'm EXCITED!! You are so very, very good, I can hardly wait for the next one!
Scada
Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2002
ah, you always take me on a little (or big) emotional journey with you...and not one word too many...now that is talent!!!
Oh, wow, Mi!! Love the form, the terseness of lines powers the words, the repititive "run", the stop which cuts off the ending...all combine to make me hope the race was won, by one...the stop came, and it didn't, in the right order. (((Hugs))) to you, Micha girl!!!
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"...again...
tears, dry
wet, wrung
truths
sung
out, and
i...
stop..."
Scada
Great little poem. Bill Murray
I know the feeling expressed in this poem, Good Write! It hits that spot!
I wish you a very Blessed New Year!
Hugs,
Maria