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Ashes
by Roger A. Ochs → (All Poetry by Roger A. Ochs)
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Ashes


 


For seventeen years


You’ve been my daughter’s


 Friend and confidant


 


You’ve seen her through


Marriage and divorce


Laughter and tears


 


You have greeted


Three children


And a new man


 


You ruled over


Ramshackle apartments


And suburban lawns


 


You hunted moles,


Voles, field mice


And chipmunks


 


You left proud offerings


Of your hunter’s prowess


On her porch


 


You trained the dogs


Taught them


Who was boss


 


You hogged the bed


Demanded dogs and humans


To curl up small


 


You were the King


Feline Lord


Of all in your purview


 


You will lie beside Mandy


Dog who thought


Herself, cat


 


You gave my daughter


So much when


She needed


 


So much more than ever, I could


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Ashes"
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 29, 2005
Roger,

It was great hearing you! This is a very touching poem, and your voice delivered it powerfully!

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
The styling of this is an absolute masterpiece! Duke

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on July 24, 2005
Dear Roger,
Intense, poignant write. I enjoy reading your work and will read more. Thanks for sharing.
Chanti

Reviewed by Harley Porter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2005
Wow. That was really depressing. BUT- I like your writing style. Creative. I'm sorry about the loss of your daughter's pet. I'm seventeen years old, and that poem made me think that maybe MY daddy thinks that way.. I'm gonna call him and tell him I love him. Hah..

Reviewed on July 19, 2005
Oh, this was so very lovely, a wonderful tribute to a loving pet,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 19, 2005
What a gold ribbon tribute you've given Ashes! Wonderfully expressed!

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on July 17, 2005
Heartfelt... :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
A heartfelt tribute well shared. Thank you, Roger. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
wonderful tribute to your daughters cat. Animals give of themselves freely. i am sure your daughter will love this one!

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Sorry to hear about her loss. Pets offer a lot more than many humans, self included.

Bob H

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on July 12, 2005
Wiser than we know, of greater heart than we sometimes appreciate...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 12, 2005
Truly sorry to hear about this family loss, Roger; Ashes sounds like quite a feline and may he live on in your hearts and souls forever.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on July 12, 2005
beautifully expressed, roger, though the last line is a bit over the top!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
family are those who comfort and assure that love is felt within ...

a most moving tribute ...

Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
anyone with a pet (even dog people like me) will be touched by this. my pitbull, napolean, died some years ago, but i still feel the sting of it every so often. and that's when i hear a song playing for him, a triumphant funeral march, and i stand up, and salute him, my little brother.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
ASHES is a very touching and eloquent tribute to a special family member.

~Mari

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
Dear Roger,

"It's all about family." You told me that long ago. Ashes is family. Your poem is evidence of your great heart and your deep love for your daughter and for the unforgetable Ashes. katy xox

Reviewed on July 11, 2005
Roger,

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww...this is heartbreaking! You did the best you could. Never forget that.

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
I love animals . . . very much, but that is one hell of a statement, that the feline pet gave your daughter more than you could, or did.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
wonderful tribute but i doubt she beat what you had to offer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
You have brought out the natural character of a pet that can make itself more endearing to us than our human counterparts. Excellent depth of feeling in this one Roger!

Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 11, 2005
Awwwww this is such a touching read...a pet can be so much more than just a friend!!

Love Tinka


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