You mean it was all just a pack of lies? And still I became so tangled in your web (just kidding)...actually this is a spare but entirely gorgeous write.... - Duke
so its best to refrain from the song that is sung with no melody for its refrain will only leave one sounding empty ...
i like the unique impact of this poem, Roger ...
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2005
I read this slowly 3 times, Roger. Each read created a fully developed scenario, entirely different from the last, until I reached that last line, the chilling impact.
The simple language suggests that it is straightforward, literal. Why, then, did the word "enigma" pop into each of those scenarios? The language, I think, is a buffer for what is hidden behind the words... yet, it feels like that expression "hiding in plain sight."
It's inside... but I can't seem to say it. katy xox
Awesome write, Roger. What we won't do to share a few moments of companionship with someone we have feelings for. We have a hidden agenda, to be sure, though we hope we are not overly transparent.
Take care,
Sherry
She was quite capable of taking care of herself...She appreciated everything he was doing for her and the Grandmothers Four, but she needed his help, not for him to take over.
peace,
Carolyn
Bob H
Very thought provoking!!
Love Tinka
i like the unique impact of this poem, Roger ...
The simple language suggests that it is straightforward, literal. Why, then, did the word "enigma" pop into each of those scenarios? The language, I think, is a buffer for what is hidden behind the words... yet, it feels like that expression "hiding in plain sight."
It's inside... but I can't seem to say it. katy xox
Take care,
Sherry
Is it wrong to listen to the song of one
who is only a liar? Should I try;-)...
Eileen