If I Could (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 2, 2008

Paul,
These stanzas capture good reasons to write. I like the sentiments in general and I wish more people felt this way. Nicely done! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

This is truly a gem, Paul!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

I loved this, this was just a beautiful poem that shows your lovely heart..

Reindeer

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Excellent projection! It's not utopian if some of it comes true, Paul. More power to you.
Leland

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

I love this! So lovely and exquisite in style :)

--Karissa

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Hi Paul,
What a wonderful write, from a wonderful soul...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Well written poem.
Kudos!

tony

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Paul,

It's people like you who make a positive difference in this world. Excellent piece!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

great write, the flow of reading aloud was wonderful

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

A beautiful touching write.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Smoothe and easy with meaning.
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

A beautiful heart touching write Paul!!
Superbly done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

... Keep Your heart synchronizing wonders...
"If I Could" is a leaf holding dews of love.

Thnak You for posting and sharing grace and beauties of the soul to teach the minds.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Paul, your thoughts for life are beautiful.
It shows your readers what a gentle heart you have. A pleasure reading you. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

A very touching write this is Paul. One of the giving of your heart. Tender and gentle. ~SH~

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Written with a giving heart that yearns to make a difference in this world. Touching, emotional, and powerful. Nice write, Paul!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

This is a heart touching write. Just beautiful!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Paul you just accomplished your goal in my eyesight with this powerful piece of work. I think you just explained in poetic fashion all of our dreams and wishes to help others. Great write, perfectly rhymed and very well expressed. G

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

"If I could make one little child
Change his frown into a smile
Undoubtedly I'd take his grief
This is truly my belief"

...Sigh... I have two boys, both came home injured from school today, and even as I write, one is crying out in pain in his sleep...

This weary Mother, thanks you for a timely encouraging word...

Funny... in an indirect way, with an exhortation to persevere in compassion, you did just achieve the above - you just didn't get to see it!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Excellent write Paul...BHUWAN

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Just beautiful, touched my heart, Paul. Your words are more golden than you know.