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Can You Hear Me Now ?
by Paul Berube → (All Poetry by Paul Berube)
  
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I'm a servant to my time.

Don't want composite red.

Echoing tracks become redundant.

Straining vocals, abusive...

 

Murder isn't an option and

violence is never rewarded.

Cooperation can be satisfying

when the garden's tendered.

 

I'll not repeal this plea,

nor justify my opinions,

for the sake of righteousness.

I owe and wish to own no one.

 

A honed blade can only

penetrate to the hilt.

Once it has served its purpose,

no further harm can be done.

 

The junkman peddles his wares

under artificial light.

Once the lamp goes out

a candle can be lit.

 

Sharks bait their hooks

with the pimps leftovers,

until the lawman fills his pockets

with laundry stubs.

 

Lawyers bargain and wash

their hands in the judge's chambers.

They pat each other on the shoulder

over coffee, but we pay the check.
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 Reviews of "Can You Hear Me Now ?"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 4, 2008
Paul,
Strong observations about human nature. Creative writing with a dose of truth! Love and Hugs:)
Sheila
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Well, you certainly do tell it like it is. Unfortunately, it must be human nature so it will probably not change this side of eternity.
Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
Reviewed on October 16, 2003
Excellent Paul .. *smile* write on !!!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Absolutely outstanding, very excellent to read today! I loved this,

Reindeer
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
I missed this one too!!

Brilliant stuff Paul...I'm glad you're with quill in hand once again.....My best, Dani
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Powerful... profound... well thought out. Impressive!

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
..this goes into my library..fantastic write..ty!

Vesna
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 2, 2003

I'm a servant to my time.


Don't want composite red.


Echoing tracks become redundant.


Straining vocals, abusive...

Paul...clap clap clap ...my friend...you have penned a gem here my friend...this write i will cherish forever...thank u so much.....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Paul...I dont know how I missed this one..it is a fantastic and powerfully written poem..wow..you are getting better and better...floria
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
I agree with LM about the last stanza, but I'm drawn to the fourth.

Once it has served its purpose,/no further harm can be done.

That phrase is absolutely chilling in its finality.
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
So true! Great write!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Excellent piece, Paul. Enjoyed it.
Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Oh yes the last stanza Paul nailed it.
LM
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Paul,
Ooooooooh, this is a deep and powerful write. Well done!

Tami
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Excellent write! Very powerful!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Paul you hit a home run with this one! Exceptional write in every way, and right on the money!
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Outstanding poem Paul, with a very strong message.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Paul, this is your best write.
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Outstanding write, my friend.
You have power in your verses..
This is a write everyone should
read! ~Excellent!

~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Excellent piece and so true I love the ending.
Taylor
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Auch!! I think I heard you Paul!!

Very strong write my friend!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Excellent write. Very deep in meaning. Couldn't agree more about the lawyers!
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Paul, this is excellent. Amazing pictures of metaphor and irony. A desperately sad depiction of the human condition.
Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
The way of the world... Not what it should be.. but what is.. excellent write!!!
Lawyers bargain and wash


their hands in the judge's chambers.


They pat each other on the shoulder


over coffee, but we pay the check.



Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Wonderful piece..
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Loud and clear! Good write Paul. Lisa
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