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I Killed A Man
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(Warning: The following words are graphic and can be disturbing, it is all fiction)


You walk in one night after work and find your wife sleeping in your bed with a complete stranger, what will you do?

At the strike of midnight
My hands were covered with blood
Lying down died
Were my wife and a stranger
Her eyes wild open, covered with guilt
All I could remember was her screaming:
“He is just a friend”
I killed them, so I realize
The mother to my children
“What have you done?”
A voice whispers inside me
I killed a man
Sleeping with my wife.



(Should i have kill them both? or what will you have done?)

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 Reviews of "I Killed A Man"
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
I found this disturbing too and I would have left. Well done Toris
Chrissie

Reviewed on May 4, 2003
It was graphic, yes. You can also expand this into a short story as well, since it seems a very good source for writing a short story.

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
welcome to the real world!!
This happens daily around me in south africa...well written but upsetting too......

Reviewed by oreva
Reviewed on May 2, 2003
If i was the man i would let the man ,butas for my wife i make regret for ever making that mistake but i will forgive her.

Reviewed on May 1, 2003
Very disturbing indeed, I would have left...

Reindeer


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