An interesting change in style. But I'm not sure about the chorus. I don't see anywhere where it could be emphasized. And I'm not getting any melody by reading it. But you know better than I because you play music to go with it.
Still wondering which Rio you are writing about: the Rio Grande or Rio de Janeiro? ;-)
Still wondering which Rio you are writing about: the Rio Grande or Rio de Janeiro? ;-)
I know that Rio simply means River in Spanish.
Ron
The words conjure up such a beautiful
scene…I too feel
so sorry for those people
living in the Cities…
Diana…