Hopeless and Tired (poem) by Sarah L Tagert on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

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Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

I felt this deeply Sarah....I have CFS and I get so tired of life being a constant struggle and you have put into words how I feel sometimes.
Great writing
Andrea

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

A clown for 15+ years, I try to count my blessings every day ... especially on those when I feel weary! There's got to be something, you know like: I'm thankful my hair isn't green :)! I'm thankful my feet are the same size and don't complain when supporting my weight :)! The sillier they are, the more they cheer us up. If that doesn't work, go ahead and bawl. Sometimes we all need to 'let it out' ...
All life is precious ... drive past a cemetary when you're down. Maybe you have loved ones there ... don't dwell on it but on the times you spent together. My only son was murdered so, yeah, I know it's hard, but God didn't give us laughter to put on the 'back-burner' :)!
Sandy

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on May 12, 2004

Emotionally and beautifully written - wonderful!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2004

No matter what you may think Sarah, or how bad it may seem; finite life will end and your daily problems will be no more. We are all here in this world living on the promise of eternal love and I believe that is our true destiny. Far away from our earthly cares and troubles we will find an unending Paradise. God bless you and keep smiling. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 8, 2004

This sounds familiar, Sara. It is a grasping write emotionally and meaningful as well because of the human condition. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

(((sarah)))

you aren't alone--believe me--karen and i are weary of the battle, too...why can't we get a freaking break once in a while???? *tears*

((((HUGS)))) and i understand...pray for me, i'll pray for you

love, karla.

excellent emotive write--well done!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

i can understand how you feel because right now i am there, too. i feel hopeless and tired myself, and i am wondering why i am even here. i am also doubting god and wonder why he isn't even there when i need him the most! right now my attitude is, "why even pray??"

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2004

�Hopeless and Tired� Poet: You have tremendous talent and creativity. I enjoy reading Your thoughts and writes. Practice makes Perfection so they say. Welcome to the club, some days are easier then others, and You pen them all very well.

Best wishes,

Thomas Lanechanger

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 6, 2004

I think I know how you feel Sarah!!

Be string girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 6, 2004

Sarah:

think of all the things the Lord has blessed you with, and you will begin to notice a change, that's what I try and do when I begin to feel " hopeless and tired"
God Bless
Michelle