Sometimes my memory corrodes my mind
But there are parts I know it cannot change.
Sometimes I may deny past the hour of dawn
And like a migrating beast they fly away.
Why is it so difficult to forget?
Perhaps these are just partial images passing through.
Where I once lived someone lives there now
But I have to be strong to fight these images
To keep fragments of my childhood place.
So soon so little will be left
And I shall be alone.
But shall I ever find myself alone
Wondering if it had ever been
This place, this life
The memory makes it difficult to forget.
But like a pail of salt water left in the sun
It evaporates and melts away
Only to leave a white powder
That tastes foul to the tongue.
This place, this life, Kukuhill
Well written example of free verse. The theme is powerfully conveyed through the use of weighty images. The strong ending certainly reinforces the poem's thought-provoking message.
It definitely deserved "poem of the week" status on www.literatenubian.com
I understand all too well. Memories such as these are never forgotten. they are sweet and sad. Its the sad ones that keep coming to the suface to haunt you. Nice writing.
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Reviewed on March 25, 2002
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It definitely deserved "poem of the week" status on www.literatenubian.com
Thanks for posting it, Peter.
Patrick
Christy
This is beautiful...
Sometimes the harder we try to forget, the more
we only remember...
Great piece...
Thanks,
Trixie Love
An excellent piece. Thank you for your kind comments on mine!
Caryn
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