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Darla
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A poem about obsessive love

I remove each grain


Of dirt from under my short


Finger nails, you thought I was vain


When I said, ‘I am the best


Thing that ever happened to you.’


But you knew I was right.


 


I wanted to prove my love to you


But you wouldn’t let me.  You said


You were leaving me for someone new.


I thought you were lying, messing with my head.


You said you were serious and I was shocked,


I didn’t know what to do.


 


So I did the best thing I could think of.


I went downstairs and got a knife.


I was finally going to prove my love for you.


I came back upstairs to see you packing.


You looked at me with a surprised look.


I said I wanted to show how much I love you.


 


I came closer to you and showered you


With my love as you showered me with yours.


After we finished making love, I carried you


Downstairs and outside.  Now here I stand


Looking at your angelic body in your eternal bed,


‘I was the best thing that ever happened to you,’ like I said.


 


2004 Gustavo White


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 Reviews of "Darla"
Reviewed on September 3, 2004
This poem, "Darla" froze my heart! (I mean it.)

Enjoyed the reading.

You have a unique suspense style. Keep on writing and posting. Let the world see the color of Your quills.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 3, 2004
This is brutal! The imagery gave me cold chills, the thoughts will give me nightmares.
Tough write.

Lisa


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