so this is a terribly rough draft...couldn't end it so I just kept writing....soon I will probably condense this A LOT...any criticism is appreciated

I love it when I finally come back to this feeling,
Look to love's sky, realize I'm kneeling,
Praying for infinity to explain
This essence you give to me.

I love when we fight,
I love when I'm right,
But even when I'm wrong,
I love when you turn and gaze at me,
Knowing in our hearts we sing the same song.

I love the lust,
I love the trust,
I love that white sparkle in your eye, like angel's dust,
Falling like a feather,
Like even He knows we were meant to be together.

I love when you just want to cuddle,
When you just want to huddle up tight,
To find heart warmth is better doubled.

When I try to cry away my troubled past,
I love that you shroud my heart from the sad parts of life,
Love holding fast.

You said true love is when love doesn't have to lie,
And you love it that I try,
And even though I'm a guy,
I love it when you like what I wear.

I love it that you care,
I love the fact that even if I lose you,
You'll always be here.

Right here,
Where you can feel I'm alive,
Five fingers fold around to cover thine eyes,
Flutter, stutter, then I spun her around.
gasp, tear drop, then hurridly void of sound.
Lips lock reveal to all our love is bound.

I love that when the sun goes down,
And my knees buckle as I drop to the ground,
You glide to my side telling me to
'turn that frown upside-down'.
And I do.

Because I know that you know I love you,
And even though you try to act
Like you were not this love-struck little girl,
You love that I'd love to give you the world.

I love your lips,
I love your hips,
I love your cheek bones 
manufacturing those sexy deep moans.

I love that subtle stroke of midnight against my skin,
We don't make love, we create love,
For the screams of passion are enough to awake love,
In the anima of the lost ones,
Who learn the hard way the cost of love,

We show them the transaction of love
from you to me is free,
And maybe one day they will see
that what once was you alone can be we.

I love you deeply,
I love you completely,
And even when I don't show my love,
I love that you still know, my love.