If You Can See Me (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

If You Can See Me
by A PAX → (All Poetry by A PAX)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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If You Can See Me I have not seen you for a life time! Actually, I never thought I'd see you again.... How fast can my feet carry me I am calling you Can't you see me? Can't you hear me?? I'm practically right in front of you Hello!! Hello? Why are your movements so strange You seem weak Are you sick Hellooooo Look this way Hey! Why don't you stop talking to those people! Hey! It's me!!! Hiiiiii ? Oh finally! You look my way for one second, then turn away??? Like you are looking right through me.... This is freaky and disturbing.... Your feet don't seem to touch ground..... You look like a cloud... Oh this makes me very uncomfortable.... HELLOOOOOOOOOO Focus!!! This is frustrating, I will not give up though..... TALK TO ME.. OK forget it, I am out of here..... I need to walk I need to talk to someone.... Hey, I know those people Oh no They cannot hear me I scream, joke, laugh Hey!!! It's not just you No one can hear me Why am I still talking to you in my head, you ignored me Looked right through me You were like fog Am I fog too? This is silly.. No it's scary! How come no one can see me, yet you can talk to those other people You all see one another, but don't see me I am alone Why It's like you died by those people and I died alone, so I am dead Alone Creepy thought! It cannot be!!! Why can I see so many people, who cannot see me!!! What's going on??? Nothing, because Well, you tell me how this ends If you can see me Pax A June 20, 1011 �

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 31, 2011

A Pax, to come to grips with this journey is a ride of emotional fantasy for me. I can see you. Can you see me? There is no end to this my dear friend. It is an eternal journey of human fascination. Me thinks. i bid you love and joy my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 1, 2011

Hey, I can see you. Guess who.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 25, 2011

I can see you. Dang, Anita, I was feeling quite invisible myself. I was actually toying with the theory that I was invisible, so this poem made me laugh, but on the other hand...I know that feeling. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 22, 2011

Excellent offering...all I can see is that this is spooky...and the delivery date of a ghost....lol!!

Feel ignored myself!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 21, 2011

well delivered!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 20, 2011

Wow, you drew me right in, fabulous...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Great delivery, Pax,
the breaks and spaces, the questions...
uncertainty everywhere, reality grip elusive.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by A PAX