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Obsessive Behavior
by Alfrieda Hylton → (All Poetry by Alfrieda Hylton)
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Warning signs of dating

OBESSIVE BEHAVIOR

Of all honesty, you are insecure, extremely jealous

Controlling, manipulative, deceitful, and overly possessive

Where do these disturb feelings come from?

Your irrational thoughts has clutter-up your brain

And turned you completely into madness

What happen to your calm and gentle spirit?

You have lost site of what we have together

The very basic rule is to love me unconditionally

I do admit, loving you used to be good

Now it is a nightmare

Your demeaning and degrading foolishness

Has driven a wedge between us

In other words, love does not live here anymore

I have been fooling myself for too long

You just not the right person for me

It is time to end this unstable relationship

I deserve to be treated better than this

Therefore, I am letting a brother go

John 15:12 says, "This is my commandment, that ye love one another, as I have loved you."


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 Reviews of "Obsessive Behavior"
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
Destructive relationships if they can't be mended need to be ended.

Reviewed by Lola Nation (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2010
Great way of letting it out and letting it go. Slight edits:

Where do these disturb feelings come from? (should be disturbed)

Your irrational thoughts has clutter-up your brain (cluttered)

What happen to your calm and gentle spirit? (happened)

Best. L


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