He hums as we walk ere so closely
our hands with our fingers both laced
a path we both just loved to follow
for time we did naught wish to waste
The air it was crisp, cool and lovely
autumns breath around every bend
colored leaves strewn about in their splendor
with many a more to descend
Out to the fields now art umber
lined with the soldiers of trees
beckons us both to come closer
for wisdom they wish us to see
Pale mist it doth form on horizon
smells of the sweet dewy air
glitters afore us like diamonds
two lovers embracing with care
Remember the leaves of our Autumn
Your aura the loveliest most seen
a color naught touched by dear autumn
our colors most wish they could dream
Carolee Dennis-Woosley
March 6, 2013
xo Regis
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Mark
Beauty of Autum's colours to the mist knowing love's aura.
Lady Mary Ann
Being out in nature does make your soul feel free and the ambience is peaceful as you walk hand in hand...
Love,
Deborah
Di
Your heart sees things that cannot be seen with the eyes, it’s filled with love and beauty.
You're a beautiful white soul Carol
of Love only You can Write!
Lady Vivian
budd
Gail
Love ya!
Jane
smells of the sweet dewy air
glitters afore us like diamonds
two lovers embracing with care"
Beauty in every verse, Carol, but this one touched me deeply. When it come to writings of the heart you have no peers . . .