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The Eyes Have It
by David Maclellan → (All Poetry by David Maclellan)
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I hate my eyes

They can't take in enough of you

Betraying my secret thoughts

Can you resist the love they reflect?

Can you deal with the tears they shed?

Your beauty destroys me

I lay scattered at your feet

I search the level of my platform

There was only ever me

But I see you from afar

Our paths are destined, on a collision course

To resist is futile

Fatalistic inevitability commenced on that night

And it will survive forever

I am a master of pain

Don't hurt me, marry me, bury me
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 Reviews of "The Eyes Have It"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 14, 2010
TOTALLY CAPTURED....SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL...I HOPE IT IS. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2010
The rawness of passion's truth. The need to simply indulge the desire and not have weird consequences attached; a love to completeness and ending. Great show of spirited passion, yet, so, with a rawness that feeds a clear understanding.
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
Very well achieved, David
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
Just. plain. great.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Reviewed on July 24, 2010
The eyes have it and tell all! You write knowing it.... thank you for sharing... =)

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on July 24, 2010
David, I've been traveling for a spell and just now beginning to catch up. Your last 4 posts are absolutely outstanding. I've been reading your work for a while, but you've really hooked me now. Thanks Dick
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
Rich and compelling as dark chocolate, David, and with the touch of its bittersweet sensuality and its power.

John
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
I am not sure if you realize...but this is really seductive
the allurements of passion inside these lines are fire David.

laying scattered at someones feet &
not being able to see enough of them!

The lines are desire & passions all the way...
also: "Don't hurt me, marry me, bury me" WOW!!

Realizations Gifting Bow
Vickie


Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
David,

What a very romantic poem for the woman who is the inspiration for it.

Mary
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
She is but a fool to let you go...but David trying to force something only stagnates it..Just manifest it, and let it go, let the Universe handle the outcome..it will be what it is suppose to be..You are a beautiful soul, don't ever forget it..

Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
This interesting poem gives that "special person" a look at your inner soul. It also leaves you vulnerable.........! A lucky lady to be cared for this much.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
David, this is so beautiful and pain filled...it's as though the reader can see into your soul.
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
a very impressive poem of abandonment to the power of attraction. much enjoyed.
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
What woman could resist a proposal like that? How romantic and blunt I might add....giggle.....loved it, David!

Anna
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 23, 2010
I love your poem --
This is brazen and intense, dark and beautiful ~
Blessings,
Christine
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