Alas, my Muse has turned her back and left my mind in mire; the words my heart and soul do seek have died, and fight respire. The lofty thoughts and soaring words that God allowed to me have melted as the sand dunes by encroaching waves of sea.
It is a gift when words we write touch others' hearts and minds; but now the rhyme that grants release in murk has been confined. It seems the writing hand has written, burned out, run its course, and all that's left are empty thoughts and words, and life's remorse.
We must be on the same page today Joyce, but your gift for words always amazes me...you must have a extra muse on standby....(smiles)
excellent piece, a true keeper!
A muse is like a genie in a bottle. They only appear when you truly need them. This poem does not struggle one bit without her. I am inspired through your words. She'll most likely be back when you truly need her. She's off with the genie granting wishes to those writers less talented. You're found, Joyce, not lost! Love the picture!
Sage
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2005
Just as I was about to comment I saw the name Petrosky. Sounds very eastern european,like polish or russian?
But great poem saying what we all think at times, but can't express with such poetic skill!
Ah, shoot! I always marvel at you folks out there in cyberspace that write about your Muses being on strike, but the words you use to explain all that to us are simply "Muse-inspired."
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Birgit and Roger
excellent piece, a true keeper!
Carole...love and peace
We need you back where you belong Joyce.
Your rhythm and rhyme make you a Muse-ician!
Love & Light,
Joseph
Sage
But great poem saying what we all think at times, but can't express with such poetic skill!
Regis
Love Tinka
write like this!;-) Superb poem Joyce!